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Reason of lack of clean water

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One of the main reason of not having clean water is the human behaviours. which affect the clean water availability. Human action like deforestation, degredation, affect the cleanless of water. . . and also affect the availibily of water. If we talk about deforestation and degredation it mean the cutting of trees from forest in high quantity, or the conversion of forest into lanscape, homes, factorize etc respectively. These both reason can take the availability of clean water very tough. . . Also the human action make the temperature rapidly high which also affect the availability of clean water.
One of the main reason of not having
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availability.

Human action like deforestation,
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mean
the cutting of trees from forest in high quantity, or the conversion of forest into
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lanscape
, homes, factorize etc
respectively
. These both reason can take the availability of
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tough.
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IELTS essay Reason of lack of clean water

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
99 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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