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Vehicle technology is advancing rapidly and cars that drive themselves have already been developed. In the near future, most people will use driverless cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Vehicle technology is advancing rapidly and cars that drive themselves have already been developed. In the near future, most people will use driverless cars. with this statement? AdEw
It is considered that future technology will enable people to use full automatic cars as there is an extreme growth in car manufacture technology. Personally speaking, I fully aggre with that opinion given the fact that technology has gradually taken over every aspect of our lives. First of all, as our world is becoming increasingly more modern, so is technology is getting more sophisticated as well. In other words, it would be extremely possible that future transportations would be automatically controlled by advanced computer programs. Moreover, this particular innovation has been the central project of several educational institutions and well-known car companies. For instance, in 2018 joint project between top American Universities and Tesla tested new vehicle models which was fully operated without the intervention of human being. Consequently, that research was an indication that this insightful innovation is in its final phase. Secondly, in present day simplicity and independence are two things which modern people like the most. And innovative technology must provide such demands in order to stay afloat from being ignored by their potential consumers. If we looked at carefully what made Tesla as the most well-known advanced-car manufactures, passing the long-established ones such as Toyota, Ford, etc. Then we would get the discerning behind their successful stories. For example, Tesla knew exactly what people's need realy is in present day and in the near future. Then they launched this ambitious project. And today they frequently associated with advanced vehicle company. Owing to this fact, people's demand has driven car manufacture to develop this type of car. To conclude, the growth of technology has shaped the way of car manufacture creating future vehicle models. And it only takes couple of years until we finally see this new innovation being used on the road.
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technology
will enable
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people
to
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use
full automatic
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cars
as there is an extreme growth in
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car
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manufacture
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technology
.
Personally
speaking, I
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aggre
with that opinion
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given
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technology
has
gradually
taken over every aspect of our
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lives
.

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First of all
, as our world is becoming
increasingly
more modern,
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so
is
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technology
is getting more sophisticated
as well
.
In other words
, it would be
extremely
possible that
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future
transportations would be
automatically
controlled by advanced computer programs.
Moreover
, this particular innovation has been the central project of several educational institutions and well-known
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car
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companies
.
For instance
, in 2018 joint project between top American Universities and Tesla
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tested
new vehicle models which was
fully
operated without the intervention of human being.
Consequently
, that research was an indication that this insightful innovation is in its final phase.

Secondly
, in present day simplicity and independence are two things which modern
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people
like the most. And innovative
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technology
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must
provide such demands in order to stay afloat from being
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ignored
by their potential consumers. If we looked at
carefully
what made Tesla as the most well-known advanced-car manufactures, passing the long-established ones such as Toyota, Ford, etc. Then we would
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get
the discerning behind their successful stories.
For example
, Tesla knew exactly what
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people
's need
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realy
is in present day and in the near
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future
. Then they launched this ambitious project. And
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today
they
frequently
associated with advanced vehicle
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company
. Owing to this fact,
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people
's demand has driven
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car
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manufacture
to develop this type of car.

To conclude
, the growth of
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technology
has shaped the way of
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car
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manufacture
creating
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future
vehicle models. And it
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only
takes
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couple of
years until we
finally
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see
this new innovation being
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used
on the road.
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IELTS essay Vehicle technology is advancing rapidly and cars that drive themselves have already been developed. In the near future, most people will use driverless cars. with this statement?

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