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Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol.some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol.do you think this is an effective measures against crime.what other solutions can you suggest.

Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. do you think this is an effective measures against crime. what other solutions can you suggest. DKAa

Due to increase in crime several initiative are take place. It is believed by few individuals that to decrease the level of atrocity is to stoppage of alcohol supply because numerous of offence is conducted at that time when a person is in drunk condition, Hence, I agree with this statement but there are also various initiatives available which reduce the criminals. This essay will highlight my views on this statement and also provide the another steps with relevant reason. Nowadays, violation is increased because of the alcohol, if the government banned the alcohol then it reduce the number of crime and also decrease the level of many disease such as T. B, blood cancer. The people who addict for alcohol enhance the domestic violence in the society and ban of alcohol control this type of misconduct and it is also a sigh of relief for those women and children who are suffering from this situation. Inspite of this, this regulation is also affect the addiction person adversely meaning that it's difficult for addictive people to leave the habit as well as mentality of person also affected. On the other hand, there is ample of measures which should be adopt by people for to remove or descend the felony. The first steps should be taken by the authority is to setup CCTV at every place with the help of this installation police have an eye on the crime and catch the law-breakers easily. In addition to, people should be aware regarding any illegal activity if they see something unlawful is happening with the others then they should inform the cop. Moreover, to provide the death penalty to the offenders is the major initiative to decline the criminality rate. To sum up, ban of alcohol is not the only one effective measure but I reckon there is plethero of steps which reduces the misconduct from the society.

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several initiative
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alcohol
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because
 numerous of Possible spelling mistake. 'offence' is British English.offense
offence
is conducted
 at that time when a person is in drunk condition, Hence
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
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but
 there are also
 various initiatives available which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the criminals. This essay will highlight my views on this statement and also
 provide the another steps with relevant reason.

Nowadays, violation is increased
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because
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmokeliquordrinkboozemethanolethanol
alcohol
, if the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 banned the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmokeliquordrinkboozemethanolethanol
alcohol
 then it Did you mean "reduces"?reduces
reduce
 the number of crime and also
 decrease the level of Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: "many diseases".many diseases
many disease
 such as T. B, blood cancer. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who addict for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmokeliquordrinkboozemethanolethanol
alcohol
 enhance the domestic violence in the society and ban of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmokeliquordrinkboozemethanolethanol
alcohol
 control this type of misconduct and it is also
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Inspite
 of this, this regulation is also
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affect
 the addiction person adversely
 meaning that it's difficult for addictive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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leave
 the habit as well
 as mentality of person also
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affected
.

On the other hand
, there is ample of measures which should be Consider using the past participle "adopted"?adopted
adopt
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people
 for to remove or descend the felony. The first
 steps should be taken
 by the authority is The verb 'set up' is spelled as two words. The noun 'setup' is spelled as one.to set up
to setup
 CCTV at every place with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of this installation police have an eye on the crime and catch the law-breakers easily
. In addition
 to, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should be aware regarding any illegal activity if they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 something unlawful is happening with the others then they should inform the cop. Moreover
, to provide the death penalty to the offenders is the major initiative to decline the criminality rate.

To sum up, ban of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmokeliquordrinkboozemethanolethanol
alcohol
 is not the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one effective measure This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I reckon there is Possible spelling mistake found.plethora
plethero
 of steps which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviates
reduces
 the misconduct from the society. 