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Various stages in recycling process of glass bottles

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The pictures illustrate the various stages in the recycling process of glass bottles. Overall, it can be seen that there are three main stages in the recycling process, starting with collection of wasted glass bottles and ending with new bottles with products which are ready for sale. In stage 1, the waste glass bottles are piled up in a collection area which is transported to the recycling factory using a truck. In stage 2, the glass bottles are washed with high pressure water and transferred to a glass factory. This clear, green, brown bottles are then broken into pieces and passed to a furnace where they burned at a temperature from 600 to 800 degree Celsius. This recycled liquid glass is mixed with a new liquid glass and poured into a glass shaped mould to get the bottle shape. In stage 3, the recycled new glass bottles are ready for sale in super markets after filling the products.
The pictures illustrate the various
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stages
in the recycling process of
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glass
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bottles
.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that there are three main
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stages
in the recycling process, starting with collection of wasted
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glass
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bottles
and ending with new
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bottles
with products which are ready for sale.

In
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stage
1, the waste
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glass
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bottles
are piled
up in a collection area which
is transported
to the recycling factory using a truck.

In
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stage
2, the
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glass
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bottles
are washed
with high pressure water and transferred to a
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glass
factory. This
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clear
, green, brown
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bottles
are then broken into pieces and passed to a furnace where they burned at a temperature from 600 to 800 degree Celsius. This recycled liquid
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glass
is mixed
with a new liquid
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glass
and poured into a
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glass
shaped
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mould
to
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get
the
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bottle
shape.

In
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stage
3, the recycled new
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glass
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bottles
are ready for sale in super markets after filling the products.
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IELTS essay Various stages in recycling process of glass bottles

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
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