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Variety of exams are being conducted to examine the eligibility of students for centuries. What are its causes and solutions? v.1

Variety of exams are being conducted to examine the eligibility of students for centuries. What are its causes and solutions? v. 1
To determine the qualification and eligibility of students, examinations are being conducted for more than three centuries. However, as the years passed there has been an increase in variety and number of exams. This essay shall delve into the causes and solutions to overcome this problem. Firstly, the cause of increase in huge number of exams is that, it has drastic effects on the individual’s health. When students are made to go through different kinds of test more often, this will have a huge impact on student’s mental health. Secondly, another important cause for conducting various exams regularly is that students may afraid to pursue higher studies and may drop out at before graduating from high school. For example. If the students are told that they have to go sit in various examinations frequently, then might get afraid and lose hope in graduating with good grades. There are two possible solutions to the serious problem of variety and a greater number of tests that students must appear. One way to tackle this problem is by increasing number of practical sessions. For instance, when the students are taught to simulate the problem practically, they would learn the skills instantly. Another solution is to assign students with the weekly assignments and project work. This work would give them a deeper understanding of what they are studying in class and thus result in boosting their confidence. To conclude, practical classes and weekly assignment would help students to reduce the stress, this might help in increasing their confidence level. If schools implement these solutions, they would see greater results.
To determine the qualification and eligibility of
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students
, examinations are
being conducted
for more than three centuries.
However
, as the years passed there has been an increase in variety and
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number
of exams. This essay shall delve into the causes and
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solutions
to overcome this problem.

Firstly
, the cause of increase in huge
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number
of exams is that, it has drastic effects on the individual’s health. When
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students
are made
to go through
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different
kinds of
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test
more
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often
, this will have a huge impact on
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student’s
mental health.
Secondly
, another
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important
cause for conducting various exams
regularly
is that
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students
may afraid to pursue higher studies and may drop out at
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before
graduating from high school.
For example
. If the
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students
are
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told
that they
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have to
go sit in various examinations
frequently
, then might
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get
afraid and lose hope in graduating with
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good
grades.

There are two possible
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solutions
to the serious problem of variety and a greater
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number
of
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tests
that
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students
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must
appear. One way to tackle this problem is by increasing
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number
of practical sessions.
For instance
, when the
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students
are taught
to simulate the problem
practically
, they would learn the
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skills
instantly
. Another
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solution
is to assign
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students
with the weekly assignments and project work. This work would give them a deeper understanding of what they are studying in
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class
and
thus
result in boosting their confidence.

To conclude
, practical classes and weekly assignment would
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help
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students
to
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reduce
the
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stress
, this might
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help
in increasing their confidence level. If schools implement these
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solutions
, they would
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see
greater results.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Variety of exams are being conducted to examine the eligibility of students for centuries. What are its causes and solutions? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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