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using translation is good or bad. both view and your opinion v.1

using translation is good or bad. both view and your opinion v. 1
In recent years, knowing the multiple language is inevitable. There are many people believe that by using transilation applications, this can be effectively resolved; however, there remain some disagreements. In my opinion, I strongly argue that these applications would be better than learning a foreign language due to several reasons. On the one hand, those who point out that artificially designed translators have many problems, when it applies in real life situations. One of the many reasons is that, it may not be able to recognise regional variations, dialects and slags, eventually, communication can be interrupted. Similarly, this technique is not fully developed to interpret all the language in the world. Using this, requires the internet and technical expertise to handle this effectively, but, unfortunately, this can not be possible in the most part of the world, due to lack of technical advancement. Despite the above mentioned argument, I still support translating technology. The first and foremost point here is that these devices are more accurate and faster than humans. In other words, these enable error free, speedy communications possible by this. Additionally, this saves time, otherwise, people require to spend a great amount of time to learn a new language. Therefore, many people, especially, tourists prefer this technology throughout their journey to a new region where native people speak a foreign language. Many other sectors: international trading, communications, research institutions are also benefited from these, as they can communicate flexibly than it used to be. By way of conclusion, even though people have different concepts regarding translation apps, I again reaffirm that, in my viewpoint, this the best method to interact with other people who speak a different language.
In recent years, knowing the multiple
language
is inevitable. There are
many
people
believe that by using
transilation
applications, this can be
effectively
resolved;
however
, there remain
some
disagreements. In my opinion, I
strongly
argue that these applications would be better than learning a foreign
language
due to several reasons.

On the one hand, those who point out that
artificially
designed translators have
many
problems, when it applies in real life situations. One of the
many
reasons is that, it may not be able to
recognise
regional variations, dialects and slags,
eventually
, communication can
be interrupted
.
Similarly
, this technique is not
fully
developed to interpret all the
language
in the world. Using this, requires the internet and technical expertise to handle this
effectively
,
but
, unfortunately, this can not be possible in the most part of the world, due to lack of technical advancement.

Despite the above mentioned argument, I
still
support translating technology. The
first
and foremost point here is that these devices are more accurate and faster than humans.
In other words
, these enable error free, speedy communications possible by this.
Additionally
, this saves time,
otherwise
,
people
require to spend a great amount of time to learn a new
language
.
Therefore
,
many
people
,
especially
, tourists prefer this technology throughout their journey to a new region where native
people
speak a foreign
language
.
Many
other sectors: international trading, communications, research institutions are
also
benefited from these, as they can communicate
flexibly
than it
used
to be.

By way of conclusion,
even though
people
have
different
concepts regarding translation apps, I again reaffirm that, in my viewpoint, this the best method to interact with other
people
who speak a
different
language
.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
He who knows no foreign languages knows nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS essay using translation is good or bad. both view and your opinion v. 1

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