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Using points and examples form the lecture, explain how the characteristics of target customers influence marketing strategy for products. v.1

Using points and examples form the lecture, explain how the characteristics of target customers influence marketing strategy for products. v. 1
Nowadays, people tend to purchase and eat fast or pre cooked foods rather than healthy diet. Some people believe that power has to put high expense for those products in order to promote good meal. Certainly, I agree that, it would make significant changes in society. In a way of spreading awareness about having a healthy foodstuff ministry plays a vital role. Generally, convinced foods are added with extra fat, sugar, salt and preservatives which is ultimately dangerous for human body. People keep on using those on their day-to-day life, even though they aware such a chemical mixed in it. If the union increases the levy amount of it, then people will start to compare the rate of organic staples and ready-made snack. If their budget flows beyond the level fixed, then people try to prepare homemade healthy meat or eat nutritious fruits, vegetables instead of high calorie or fat drink. In a long-run it will initiate the traditional eating habits. As a major part, the state has to do whatever they can, but, raising the tax amount will alone not enough to get peoples' attention on it. They should make stricter rules about fare ingredients and the way of processing also has to ensure it by food and manufacturing department before sending them out for sale. The regime has to cancel the license of cooking product companies who do not obey those rules. Likely, they have to conduct campaigns to discourse pros and cons of healthy and unhealthy diet. It will widely reach people and provide conscious about what they should eat. To sum it up, for sure, by increasing the rate amount on a ready-made mix or unhealthy snack could change the people eating behaviour. It also helps them to come back to traditional healthy lifestyle.
Nowadays,
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people
tend to
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purchase
and eat
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fast
or
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pre
cooked foods
rather
than
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healthy
diet.
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Some
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people
believe that power
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has to
put high expense for those products in order to promote
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good
meal.
Certainly
, I
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agree
that, it would
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make
significant
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changes
in society.

In a way of spreading awareness about having a
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healthy
foodstuff ministry plays a vital role.
Generally
, convinced foods are
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added
with extra
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fat
, sugar, salt and preservatives which is
ultimately
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dangerous
for human body.
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People
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keep
on using those on their day-to-day life,
even though
they aware such a chemical mixed in it. If the union increases the levy amount of it, then
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people
will
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start
to compare the rate of organic staples and ready-made snack. If their budget flows beyond the level
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fixed
, then
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people
try to prepare homemade
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healthy
meat or eat nutritious fruits, vegetables
instead
of high calorie or
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fat
drink. In a long-run it will initiate the traditional eating habits.

As a major part, the state
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has to
do whatever they can,
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but
, raising the tax amount will alone not
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enough
to
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get
peoples' attention on it. They should
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make
stricter
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rules
about fare ingredients and the way of processing
also
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has to
ensure it by food and manufacturing department
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before
sending them out for sale. The regime
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has to
cancel the license of cooking product
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companies
who do not obey those
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rules
. Likely, they
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have to
conduct campaigns to discourse pros and cons of
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healthy
and unhealthy diet. It will
widely
reach
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people
and provide conscious about what they should eat.

To sum it up, for sure, by increasing the rate amount on a ready-made mix or unhealthy snack could
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change
the
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people
eating
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behaviour
. It
also
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helps
them to
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come
back to traditional
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healthy
lifestyle.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Using points and examples form the lecture, explain how the characteristics of target customers influence marketing strategy for products. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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