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Using internet bad sides and good sides

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Nowadays Internet is becoming an inseparable part of humans life. Apparently, it gives huge facilities to learn anything we want. Notwithstanding a person absolutely come across another unnecessary or unimportant event during surfing on internet. Especially, middle age group of people’s between fifteen and forty years old men and women are addicted to internet. I will prove my own view with possible ways. Students who study from school up to high education’s never separate from their mobile phones not only lunch time but also during the lesson. Using social network provides us with finding the issue in society besides that it’s solutions. It helps our work to complicate easily. However, Website has drawbacks. Firstly, man are lazy on a daily basis moreover they never try to run their brain as a result brain do not even to think about calculating. Because of this reason currently less people are well-educated and less buff rather than before. For instance, I also teach pupils at education system. Pupils ‘s behaviour is not tolerable. They don’t pay attention not only the lesson but also even to obey the tutor. I wish in the future pupils would use internet in a positive direction.
Nowadays Internet is becoming an inseparable part of humans life.
Apparently
, it gives huge facilities to learn anything we want. Notwithstanding a person
absolutely
come
across another unnecessary or unimportant
event
during surfing on internet.
Especially
, middle age group of
people
’s between fifteen and forty years
old
men
and women
are addicted
to internet. I will prove my
own
view with possible ways.

Students who study from school up to high education’s never separate from their mobile phones not
only
lunch time
but
also
during the lesson. Using social network provides us with finding the issue in society
besides
that it’s solutions. It
helps
our work to complicate
easily
.
However
, Website has drawbacks.
Firstly
,
man
are lazy on a daily basis
moreover
they never try to run their brain
as a result
brain do not even to
think
about calculating.
Because of this
reason
currently
less
people
are well-educated and less buff
rather
than
before
.
For instance
, I
also
teach pupils at education system. Pupils ‘s
behaviour
is not tolerable. They don’t pay attention not
only
the lesson
but
also
even to obey the tutor. I wish in the future pupils would
use
internet in a
positive
direction.
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IELTS essay Using internet bad sides and good sides

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