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Investment of Public Park

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I think that investing in public park is good way for especially people. In the modern world public park is essential to social life. The park areas have become a very well face to face interaction with people and social activities place thanks to investment. I personally believe that public park is beneficial for people from all ages. It leads to healthy, economical and social activities. First of all, public parks reduce air pollution, green space helps to encourage active life styles. Suc as jogging, cycling and walking with friends. Public parks reduce stress and in turn it reduces healtcare costs. Secondly, public parks are areas ato attract not only locals but also tourists and this generate income for nearby businesses like restaurants, cafe etc. In conclusion, public park advantages can be listed as reduces air pollution, heps to encourage active life, reduces stress and reduces healthcare cost. Parks can be considered valuable assets that provide economical and social benefits for governments and communities.
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. In the modern world
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is essential to
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life. The
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areas have become a
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activities place thanks to investment. I
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public
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is beneficial for
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people
from all ages. It leads to healthy, economical and
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social
activities.
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reduce
air pollution, green space
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helps
to encourage active life styles.
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as jogging, cycling and walking with friends.
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parks
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attract not
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locals
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tourists and this generate income for nearby businesses like restaurants,
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,
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advantages can
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as
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air pollution,
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heps
to encourage active life,
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reduces
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stress
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healthcare cost.
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benefits for
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governments
and communities.
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IELTS essay Investment of Public Park

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
164 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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