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using computer everyday has more negative than positive impact on children.Do you agree ?

using computer everyday has more negative than positive impact on children. Do you agree? 256Rx

There is no doubt, computers are used for various purposes. However, it has both positive and negative impact on children. I m going to discuss my points in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, computers have many benefits for kids do their study on it and also connect with their near and dear ones. Children make their notes about any study or other work and keep them for a long time. By doing this, they can save their time and use that time on other task as well. They can study anytime and read notes anywhere through computer. Apart from it, computers are very helpful for them. kids can talk with others through online on computer. They can also spend their leisure time by doing paintings on it or by playing some games because games are fruitful for them to increase their intelligency level. consequently, by playing valuable games they can sharp their memory and kids change their mood and feel more energetic and calm too. On the other hand, computers put adverse impacts on children. kids usually like to play games on it, which are not beneficial for them. Because, when juveniles play any game for a long time then their eyesight becomes weak. They not only become lazy but also get poor marks in their studies because they do not focus on their studies and sometimes get disconnected from their studies. Eventually, children like to play video games on computers, which put negative impact on their holistic development because by playing indoor games they can never learn the moral skills like competition, patience, discipline and co-operation. These skills, they can learn only when they participate in outdoor games. Sometimes, kids may suffer from some health hazards likewise backpain, weak eyesight and knee problems. As a result, excessive use of computers bad for children's health. To concise, although computers have some cons, which prove harmful for children's health, yet it has a lot of pros, which cannot be ignored and fruitful for children in many ways.

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