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Using bicycle rather than car is better for our environment

Using bicycle rather than car is better for our environment 5kMED
It is argued that riding bicycle is better than driving motor car for our environment. This essay agrees with the suggestion because cycling doesn’t emit exhaust as a car does and it also makes less noise than driving. Riding a bicycle doesn’t produce carbon gas that is responsible for climate change and global warming. These phenomena are caused by the increase in the amount of greenhouse gas in the atmosphere, for example, carbon dioxide which is emitted from vehicles. These changes can result in numerous serious hazards to the environment such as rising sea levels, intense drought, storms, and floods. So, humans need to prevent the risk of climate emergencies by changing the way they travel. And cycling can reduce greenhouse gas emissions from transport systems, which will slow the effects of climate change and global warming. It is because cycling doesn’t require any kind of petrol like cars to keep moving. Furthermore, riding bicycle can reduce noise pollution which has a serious effect on the environment. Vehicular noise pollution is unwanted or disturbing sounds that affect the health and residence of humans in the environment. Except villages or countrysides where there aren’t many cars, people who live in or move to big cities or towns have to face everyday noise as the majority of the traffic on them is made up of several kinds of vehicles which produce engine sounds and honking. And bicycles are totally unlike cars because they have only bell ring sounds that are not as noisy as car horns. When people ride bicycles to travel, they just hear the sound of cycling instead of the noisy sound of driving cars. In conclusion, using bicycle rather than car is greater for our environment due to the fact that biking doesn’t release any gases which cause air pollution and it helps hold down the noise pollution.
It
is argued
that riding
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bicycle
is better than driving motor
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car
for our
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environment
. This essay
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agrees
with the suggestion
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because
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cycling
doesn’t emit exhaust as a
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car
does and it
also
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makes
less
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noise
than driving.

Riding a
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bicycle
doesn’t produce carbon gas
that is
responsible for climate
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change
and global warming. These phenomena
are caused
by the increase in the amount of greenhouse gas in the atmosphere,
for example
, carbon dioxide which
is emitted
from vehicles. These
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changes
can result in numerous serious hazards to the
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environment
such as rising sea levels, intense drought, storms, and floods.
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So
, humans need to
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prevent
the
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risk
of climate emergencies by changing the way they travel. And
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cycling
can
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reduce
greenhouse gas emissions from transport systems, which will slow the effects of climate
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change
and global warming. It is
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because
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cycling
doesn’t require any kind of petrol like
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cars
to
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keep
moving.

Furthermore
, riding
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bicycle
can
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reduce
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noise
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pollution
which has a serious effect on the
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environment
. Vehicular
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noise
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pollution
is unwanted
or disturbing
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sounds
that affect the health and residence of humans in the
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environment
. Except villages or countrysides where there aren’t
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many
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cars
,
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people
who
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live
in or
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move
to
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big
cities or towns
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have to
face everyday
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noise
as the majority of the traffic on them
is made
up of several kinds of vehicles which produce engine
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sounds
and honking. And
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bicycles
are
totally
unlike
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cars
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because
they have
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only
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bell
ring
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sounds
that are not as noisy as
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car
horns. When
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people
ride
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bicycles
to travel, they
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just
hear the
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sound
of
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cycling
instead
of the noisy
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sound
of driving cars.

In conclusion
, using
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bicycle
rather
than
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car
is greater for our
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environment
due to the fact that biking doesn’t release any gases which cause air
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pollution
and it
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helps
hold down the
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noise
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pollution
.
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IELTS essay Using bicycle rather than car is better for our environment

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6.5
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