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Language is the key to every lock.

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To know other country mother tounge is to add another eye to see a world. In this essay, why learning a language is important will be described. To begin, World is separated in many slices and the slices could be known as ocean, jungle, continent and so on. Every continent contains piece of countries which could be differ from one place to another. Different country depend on there language to have communicate with eachother furthermore, even the baby are also taught there own mothertounge so they can understand feelings between them. For example, if the people of Japan goes to Nepal and talk japanesese with the resident of nepal then there can not be any type of proper conversation between them which would not help them to understand eachother likewise, same goes to nepalese people in japan. In conculde, the word language is very important either we live in our country or other nation. Language help person to have mutual understanding and creates a bond between peoples.
To know other
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add
another eye to
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a world. In this essay, why learning a
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language
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important
will be
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, World
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many
slices and the slices could
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as ocean, jungle, continent and
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so
on. Every continent contains piece of
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countries
which could be
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from one place to another.
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country
depend on there
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to have
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eachother
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they can understand feelings between them.
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people
of Japan goes to Nepal and talk
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japanesese
with the resident of
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nepal
then there can not be any type of proper conversation between them which would not
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them to understand
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eachother
likewise
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nepalese
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conculde
, the word
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language
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either we
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in our
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Language
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person to have mutual understanding and creates a bond between peoples.
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IELTS essay Language is the key to every lock.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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