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Usage of plastics should be banned. up to what extent you agree or disagree

Usage of plastics should be banned. up to what extent you agree or disagree 8aQBk
Plastics is one of the factors involved in leading the pollution which is contributing towards the decline in the good lifestyle and pure water. It should be stopped before this whole and the coming generation suffer more than the existing humans. I totally agree it should be vanished 90% from earth to save ourselves. This essay will talk about how much I agree with removal of plastics. According to the studies done by the university of California, it says the main reason for the decline in health is availability of plastic in abundance. It is present everywhere and at the same time we are consuming plastics in all the forms and the ways. The food we eat, the water we drink and the groceries we get in. It is all made up of plastics. The only reason it is been used and has been used in cheap quality is because of the low taxes and also the easy availability of resources to make this. For an instance, in Malaysia in a river while cleaning 80% of plastic bottles were found. We need to act before anyone or more damage can happen to this beautiful earth. Let us all start this practice from our home. Let us start using paper or jute or cloth bags while going for shopping. Let us start to drink water from copper or glass bottles. Let u say no when someone offers us something in plastics. Government needs to take strict actions and high fines to all the shops who are using plastic bags. To illustrate Australia in 2016 have decided to collect the plastics by putting net in front of their rivers to filter water and the waste one side. To recapitulate we need to take an immediate action and every country should take a step forward to say no to this. We need to take some steps before it is too late to decide on.
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Plastics
is one of the factors involved in leading the pollution which is contributing towards the decline in the
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good
lifestyle and pure
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water
. It should be
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stopped
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before
this whole and the coming generation suffer more than the existing humans. I
totally
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agree
it should
be vanished
90% from earth to save ourselves. This essay will talk about how much I
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agree
with removal of plastics.

According to the studies done by the
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university of California
, it says the main reason for the decline in health is availability of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
in abundance. It is present everywhere and at the same time we are consuming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastics
in all the forms and the ways. The food we eat, the
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water
we drink and the groceries we
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get
in. It is all made up of
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plastics
. The
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only
reason it
is been
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used
and has been
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used
in
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cheap
quality is
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because
of the low taxes and
also
the easy availability of resources to
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make
this. For an instance, in Malaysia in a river while cleaning 80% of
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plastic
bottles
were found
.

We
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need
to act
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before
anyone or more damage can happen to this
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beautiful
earth.
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us all
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this practice from our home.
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us
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using paper or jute or cloth bags while going for shopping.
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Let
us
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start
to drink
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water
from copper or glass bottles.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Let
u say no when someone offers us something in
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plastics
.
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Government
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needs
to take strict actions and high fines to all the shops who are using
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plastic
bags. To illustrate Australia in 2016 have decided to collect the
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plastics
by putting net in front of their rivers to filter
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water
and the waste one side.

To recapitulate we
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need
to take an immediate action and every country should take a step forward to say no to this. We
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need
to take
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some
steps
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before
it is too late to decide on.
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IELTS essay Usage of plastics should be banned. up to what extent you agree or disagree

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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