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urn to page 128 and look at some meeting notes about how to solve traffic congestion and pollution in Willow City. Write the proposal in around 200 words.

urn to page 128 and look at some meeting notes about how to solve traffic congestion and pollution in Willow City. Write the proposal in around 200 words. kL3B2
This proposal aims to solve traffic congestion and pollution in Willow City. In order to solve this problem, we need to execute a long-term strategy is ban gas-powered vehicles from the center in 3 years. At the same time, encourage more people to use public transport. Recently, there have been complaints about traffic congestion in the center of the city, which express there is a lot of pollution. / high levels of pollution We found several solutions after conducting the study. In the city center, the new technology would enable us to use driverless and battery-powered people-movers instead of trains and buses. The benefits of implementing this solution include lower travel expenses, which lead to increased consumer more use. Furthermore, no more infrastructure will need. Aside from, banning gas-powered vehicles from entering the center will cut pollution. Finally, reality shows that personal vehicles are parked 95% of the time. As a result, this solution also allows the car parks to make much better use of the valuable property. It is expected that the initial investment would be high, but running costs will be cheaper and less pollution To sum up, it is recommended that we will consider buying a few vehicles and run a trial before the end of the year
This proposal aims to solve
traffic
congestion and pollution in Willow City. In order to solve this problem, we need to execute a long-term strategy is ban gas-powered
vehicles
from the center in 3 years. At the same time, encourage more
people
to
use
public transport.

Recently, there have been complaints about traffic congestion in the center of the city, which express there is
a lot of
pollution. / high levels of pollution

We found several solutions after conducting the study. In the city center, the new technology would enable us to
use
driverless and battery-powered
people
-movers
instead
of trains and buses. The benefits of implementing this solution include lower travel expenses, which lead to increased consumer more
use
.
Furthermore
, no more infrastructure will need. Aside from, banning gas-powered
vehicles
from entering the center will
cut
pollution.
Finally
, reality
shows
that personal
vehicles
are parked
95% of the time.
As a result
, this solution
also
allows
the car parks to
make
much better
use
of the valuable property.

It is
expected
that the initial investment would be high,
but
running costs will be cheaper and less pollution

To sum up, it
is recommended
that we will consider buying a few
vehicles
and run a trial
before
the
end
of the year
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IELTS essay urn to page 128 and look at some meeting notes about how to solve traffic congestion and pollution in Willow City. Write the proposal in around 200 words.

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5 paragraphs
210 words
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