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MANY PEOPLE THINK IT IS IMPORTANT TO PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT, BUT THEY MAKE NO EFFORT ON IT THEMSELVES. WHY IS IT SO AND WHAT CAN BE DONE ABOUT IT?

MANY PEOPLE THINK IT IS IMPORTANT TO PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT, BUT THEY MAKE NO EFFORT ON IT THEMSELVES. WHY IS IT SO AND WHAT CAN BE DONE ABOUT IT? yLQpV
A plethora of people realize the current situation of our mother planet and they are aware of the necessity to conserve it. Still, only a number of people are doing their duties and rest of the people are making zero effort on it by themselves. It may be due to the inavailability of time on their hectic lifestyle or may be their laziness. Only with the help of some proper awareness and changes in laws, these people could contribute to environmental protection. Most people are busy with their day to day life. They are people who are not even getting enough time for their family. No one consider nature as their first priority in such a situation. They would easily forget the need of conserving nature even though they are very much aware of it. Also, there are people who consider environmental protection as someone else's job. Like a doctor treating a patient, they are waiting for environmentalists to do necessary precautions against nature threats. Laziness is a factor but it is not the major one. Many people hesitate to plant a tree or leave some time to look after it and all. With regards to environmental conservation, an immediate step should be taken. People of all ages, irrespective of their profession, should spent some time with the nature or they should work in any organizations if they wanted to work in a group rather than doing alone. Pollutants including non biodegradable plastics should be banned and anyone using this should be punished. Government should appoint a person in every locality to monitor eco friendly behaviour of people residing there. Appreciations and punishments should be given as it requires. In conclusion, human beings are responsible for nature conservation. Everyone should be engaged in protection procedures by ignoring their busy life and laziness.
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realize the
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current
situation of our mother
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planet and
they are aware of the necessity to conserve it.
Still
,
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only
a number of
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people
are doing their duties and rest of the
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people
are making zero effort on it by themselves. It may be due to the
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inavailability
of
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time
on their hectic lifestyle or may be their laziness.
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with the
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help
of
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some
proper awareness and
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changes
in laws, these
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people
could contribute to environmental protection.

Most
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people
are busy with their
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day to day
life. They are
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people
who are not even getting
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enough
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time
for their family. No one consider
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nature
as their
first
priority in such a situation. They would
easily
forget the need of conserving
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nature
even though
they are
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very
much aware of it.
Also
, there are
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people
who consider environmental protection as someone else's job. Like a doctor treating a patient, they are waiting for environmentalists to do necessary precautions against
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nature
threats. Laziness is a factor
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but
it is not the major one.
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Many
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people
hesitate to plant a tree or
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leave
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some
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time
to look after it and all.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
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environmental conservation, an immediate step should
be taken
.
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People
of all ages, irrespective of their profession, should
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spent
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some
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time
with the
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nature or
they should work in any organizations if they wanted to work in a group
rather
than doing alone. Pollutants including
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non biodegradable
plastics should
be banned
and anyone using this should
be punished
.
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Government
should appoint a person in every locality to monitor
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eco friendly
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behaviour
of
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people
residing there. Appreciations and punishments should be
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given
as it requires.

In conclusion
, human beings are responsible for
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nature
conservation. Everyone should
be engaged
in protection procedures by ignoring their busy life and laziness.
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IELTS essay MANY PEOPLE THINK IT IS IMPORTANT TO PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT, BUT THEY MAKE NO EFFORT ON IT THEMSELVES. WHY IS IT SO AND WHAT CAN BE DONE ABOUT IT?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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