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Urban areas around the world.

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The graphic showed us a contrast between the amount of people who lived or lived in the urban areas around the world through the years. The countries that are shown in the graphic are: Africa, Asia, Latin America, North America, and Oceania. There are three different periods of time considered for the analysis, Africa and Asia shared almost the same quantity of population: these two countries had less people living in urban areas than the others in all the years. Europe, Latin America and North America have almost the same amount of population during the years. Therefore, Oceania has had a big number of people living in urban areas since 1950, but had any increase after a long decade. On the contrary, North America and Latin America North develop almost the same ciphers. Consequently, we can see a short difference between the countries, they will increase their population, in the same way, the urban areas can be bigger than the rural ones.
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people
who
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lived
or
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lived
in the
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urban
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areas
around the world through the years. The countries that
are shown
in the graphic are: Africa, Asia, Latin America,
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North
America, and Oceania.

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different
periods of time considered for the analysis, Africa and Asia shared almost the same quantity of population: these two countries had
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less
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people
living in
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urban
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areas
than the others in all the years. Europe, Latin America and
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North
America have almost the same amount of population during the years.

Therefore
, Oceania has had a
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big
number of
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people
living in
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urban
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areas
since 1950,
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but
had any increase after a long decade.
On the contrary
,
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North
America and Latin America
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North
develop almost the same ciphers.

Consequently
, we can
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see
a short difference between the countries, they will increase their population,
in the same way
, the
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urban
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areas
can be bigger than the rural ones.
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IELTS essay Urban areas around the world.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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