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Upcyling the scrap fabric

Upcyling the scrap fabric Nl0M0
We collect clothing, fabric leftovers from scrap yards, tailors, designer goods, or items from fashion brands that are no longer in use. Then we will reuse and launch a new product that is a tote bag that brings more value to users. A bag with many styles, sizes, large and small, and affordable prices will make it easy for buyers to choose. Purpose: to help protect the environment, sustainability, and uniqueness for users to avoid boredom when there are too many choices on the market. Condition: All fabrics are reusable: denim, sweater wool fabric, cotton fabrics, leather
We collect clothing,
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fabric
leftovers from scrap yards, tailors, designer
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goods
, or items from fashion brands that are no longer in
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use
. Then we will reuse and launch a new product
that is
a tote bag that brings more value to users. A bag with
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many
styles, sizes, large and
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small
, and affordable prices will
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make
it easy for buyers to choose.

Purpose: to
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help
protect the environment, sustainability, and uniqueness for users to avoid boredom when there are too
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many
choices on the market.

Condition: All
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fabrics
are reusable: denim, sweater wool
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fabric
, cotton
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fabrics
, leather
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IELTS essay Upcyling the scrap fabric

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
96 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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