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Describe your residence where you live

Describe your residence where you live KlEyN
I live in a multistoried building which is quite conventional. The first two floors of our building are decorated with brick. There is a library in front of the main gate which is known as the landmark of the building to local inhabitants. The lift shaft of our building is open and airy. There are four rooms in my flat including three balconies. The furniture of our residence is made of timber. Our living room is quite cramped because of the prefabricated furniture. The structure of our living room is extremely futuristic. Our bedrooms are so spacious so that we can feel so cozy. There is a quarry inside the building as the work of our building has not finished yet. it has a cover made with steel. The exterior of our building is full of vibrant natural resources. Besides we can enjoy a view of a plethora of high-rise apartments which are made with modern contraptions. The utopian people may feel rosy watching the exterior from my balcony. The owner of our building has just renovated it. The plan of renovating comprises demolishing the restaurant on the top floor where we go to feel the moon skyward. We live as a tenant in the building. one problem is that the spring system main door is very slack to open. Recently scientist has devised so many machines to haul and hoist which is unveiled. However, the owner has recently meshed the appliance used while renovating. The overriding issue of most of the housing is that there are not enough entertainment purposes inside the building. Nonetheless, the owner of our building has established a discotheque for teenagers.
I
live
in a multistoried
building
which is quite conventional. The
first
two floors of our
building
are decorated
with brick. There is a library in front of the main gate which
is known
as the landmark of the
building
to local inhabitants. The lift shaft of our
building
is open and airy. There are four rooms in my flat including three balconies. The furniture of our residence
is made
of timber. Our living room is quite cramped
because
of the prefabricated furniture. The structure of our living room is
extremely
futuristic. Our bedrooms are
so
spacious
so
that we can feel
so
cozy. There is a quarry inside the
building
as the work of our
building
has not finished
yet
.
it
has a cover made with steel. The exterior of our
building
is full of vibrant natural resources.
Besides
we can enjoy a view of a plethora of high-rise apartments which
are made
with modern contraptions. The utopian
people
may feel rosy watching the exterior from my balcony. The owner of our
building
has
just
renovated it.
The
plan of renovating comprises demolishing the restaurant on the top floor where we go to feel the moon skyward. We
live
as a tenant in the
building
.
one
problem is that the spring system main door is
very
slack to open. Recently scientist has devised
so
many
machines to haul and hoist which
is unveiled
.
However
, the owner has recently meshed the appliance
used
while renovating. The overriding issue of most of the housing is that there are not
enough
entertainment purposes inside the
building
. Nonetheless, the owner of our
building
has established a discotheque for
teenagers
.
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IELTS essay Describe your residence where you live

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
276 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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