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University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

The tuition fees in many American Universities are very high. It is argued that the student should be solely responsible to pay them as they reap the resulting benefits more than the society. This essay agrees with the aforementioned hypothesis and presents a couple of arguments in favor of the same. Once the university studies are completed, most of the students simply go the corporate way and bag a job of his or her dreams. A degree helps an individual earn a living and live a lifestyle of their choice. However, it has been observed that these individuals do little or nothing to give back to the community other than pay the taxes. There are very few students who are exceptional and end up inventing a product which benefits the society as a whole. But such cases are few and infrequent. It would be unfair to ask the tax payers to pay for the education of selfish individuals. The tax-payers money can be utilized in a better way. For instance, it can be used for building better infrastructure, public health campaigns etc. In conclusion, one should be responsible to pay for something if the benefits are limited to the individual. The collective money of the society cannot be and should not be used for the welfare of certain individuals.
The tuition fees in
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many
American Universities are
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very
high. It
is argued
that the student should be
solely
responsible to
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pay
them as they reap the resulting benefits more than the society. This essay
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agrees
with the aforementioned hypothesis and presents a couple of arguments in favor of the same.

Once the university studies
are completed
, most of the students
simply
go the corporate way and bag a job of
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his or her
dreams. A degree
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helps
an
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individual
earn a living and
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live
a lifestyle of their choice.
However
, it has
been observed
that these
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individuals
do
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little
or nothing to give back to the community other than
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pay
the taxes.

There are
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very
few students who are exceptional and
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end
up inventing a product which benefits the society as a whole.
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But
such cases are few and infrequent. It would be unfair to ask the
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tax payers
to
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pay
for the education of selfish
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individuals
. The tax-payers money can
be utilized
in a better way.
For instance
, it can be
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used
for building better infrastructure, public health campaigns etc.

In conclusion
, one should be responsible to
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pay
for something if the benefits
are limited
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individual
. The collective money of the society cannot be and should not be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for the welfare of certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
.
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IELTS essay University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
219 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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