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university should publish professor evaluation publicly

The reading states university should publish professor evaluation publicly and provide two reasons for it. The woman's opinion is that it is a bad idea and opposes each reason. First she explains that this policy not only does not persuade professors to reform their teaching style but also it makes them unhappy and they will not take students’ comments in consideration. second she believes that, however, students will notify the more information about the classes and their policies, but due to the fact that the students fill the forms of evaluation on the last day and in a hurry the comments are not accurate and reliable. And that's why the woman feels the university should publish professors' evaluations publicly.
The reading states university should publish professor evaluation
publicly
and provide two reasons for it. The woman's opinion is that it is a
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bad
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idea
and opposes each reason.
First
she
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explains
that this policy not
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only
does not persuade professors to reform their teaching style
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but
also
it
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makes
them
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unhappy and
they will not take students’ comments in consideration.
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second
she believes that,
however
, students will notify the more information about the classes and their policies,
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but
due to the fact that the students
The usual preposition to use after “fill” is “with”, not “the”. Did you mean “fill the forms with”?
fill the forms of
evaluation on the last day and in a hurry the comments are not accurate and reliable. And that's why the woman feels the university should publish professors' evaluations
publicly
.

IELTS essay university should publish professor evaluation publicly

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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