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The article discusses reactance, which the passage defines as people's motivation for a reform to conquer freedom and control the condition.

The article discusses reactance, which the passage defines as people's motivation for a reform to conquer freedom and control the condition. The professor provides an example of being a kid to illustrate it. He explains that imagine you are a kid and you want to play in the playground, while your parents prohibited you to play without any visible reason, as a result you wanna play more rather than past, and finally you find a way to play in the playground. Or there was a soap, which contained an environmentally damaging chemical, so the government prohibited that. After the declaration of this law people bought all this specific type of soap. And that's how the professor examples explain reactance

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's motivation for a reform to conquer freedom and control the condition. The professor provides an example of being a kid to illustrate it.

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 all this specific type of soap.

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explain
 reactance