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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. xjpa
Over the recent years, More and More people are had been attending universities and arguments have increased as to whether students should pay for this or not. Although they are convincing arguments on the both side. I strongly believe that it should be free. One argument put forward in favour of charging students is that education is becoming more expensive to funds as universities grow in size. Making students pay may maintain the quality of teaching. In addition, It is argued that the most benefit of students from university in terms of higher, paid jobs so its fair that they pay for at least some amount of money. in many countries, there is a shortage of people to do manual jobs such as plumbing and carpentry, so making university more expensive may encourage people to take up these jobs. However, there are a number of arguments in favour of making university education free for all. First of all, if education will be free it will encourage many of people who are having any financial issue or any problems related to Money so it will be more beneficial for them to join universities at free of cost. Moreover, the people who belongs to a middle class family it will be a great opportunity for them to get free education at universities and to improve their skills and work on their future career. In conclusion, I am of opinion is that all education should remain equally available to all regardless of income. This is not only fair, but will also ensure that countries can develop into the future with a well-educated workforce and education will be worth it in future.
Over the recent years, More and More
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universities
and
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as to whether
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students
should pay for this or not. Although they are convincing
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arguments
on the both side. I
strongly
believe that it should be free.

One
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argument
put forward in
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favour
of charging
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students
is that
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education
is becoming more expensive to funds as
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universities
grow in size. Making
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students
pay may maintain the quality of teaching.
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, It
is argued
that the most benefit of
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students
from
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university
in terms of higher, paid jobs
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fair
that they pay for at least
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amount of money.
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in
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countries, there is a shortage of
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people
to do manual jobs such as plumbing and carpentry,
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so
making
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more expensive may encourage
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to take up these jobs.

However
, there are a number of
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arguments
in
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favour
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university
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education
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free
for all.
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, if
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education
will be
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free
it will encourage
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of
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people
who are having any financial issue or any problems related to Money
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it will be more beneficial for them to
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join
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, the
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belongs
to a middle
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family it will be a great opportunity for them to
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free
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education
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universities
and to
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their
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skills
and work on their future career.

In conclusion
, I am of opinion is that all
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education
should remain
equally
available to all regardless of income. This is not
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,
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will
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ensure that countries can develop into the future with a well-educated workforce and
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education
will be worth it
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in future
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IELTS essay University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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