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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.9

University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. v. 9
It is commonly identifiable that the upper education is effective method to alleviate the poverty for those student who are living under the poverty line, thus many discussions are around on this topic. One of which regards on the university' s tuition fee whether it should be free for everyone. While I tend toward the viewpoint that this could have great benefit to all students as well as the university, I would admit that there are some drawbacks behind. One argument put forwards in favor of the waiving of tuition free is that all students can have same chance to place themselves into university. Currently, the tuition fee of university already imposes a great burden on a middle class family, let alone the family under poverty line. Sorrowfully, some students who are qualified to study university was unwillingly given up this chance due to cash crunch. We can avoid this situation as long as university no longer charge tuition fee. Meanwhile, the university itself can have beneficial impact as more eligible students are available and they can choose the best among them. This is win win situation, seemingly. However, reaching the conclusion that waiving tuition fee for university students is conductive does not mean we can ignore the negative consequences behind, especially on university and society. In many counties, the majority of university funding are largely from the governments and tuition fee. The waive of tuition fee will result in either reduction of university resources or subsidization of the tuition from government. The first one will inevitably set back the teaching quality. The later one will impose a great financial pressure on the governments, causing the cost cutting on other areas such as social welfare. Definitely, free university education would appeal every students, but we cannot recklessly finance all students when social resource is being concerned. The government should strategically allocate the limited financial resource to the student who has actual need.
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commonly
identifiable that the upper education is effective method to alleviate the poverty for those
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student
who are living under the poverty line,
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many
discussions are around on this topic. One of which regards on the
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fee
whether it should be free for everyone. While I tend toward the viewpoint that this could have great benefit to all
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students
as well
as the
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university
, I would admit that there are
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drawbacks behind.

One argument put forwards in favor of the waiving of tuition free is that all
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students
can have same chance to place themselves into
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university
.
Currently
, the tuition
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fee
of
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university
already imposes a great burden on a middle
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class
family,
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alone the family under poverty line.
Sorrowfully
,
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some
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students
who
are qualified
to study
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was
unwillingly
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given
up this chance due to cash crunch. We can avoid this situation as long as
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university
no longer charge tuition
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fee
. Meanwhile, the
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university
itself can have beneficial impact as more eligible
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students
are
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available and
they can choose the best among them. This is
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win win
situation,
seemingly
.

However
, reaching the conclusion that waiving tuition
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fee
for
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university
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students
is conductive does not mean we can
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ignore
the
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negative
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,
especially
on
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university
and society. In
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many
counties, the majority of
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funding are
largely
from the
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governments
and tuition
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fee
.
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The waive
of tuition
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fee
will result in either reduction of
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university
resources or subsidization of the tuition from
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. The
first
one will
inevitably
set back the teaching quality.
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later one will impose a great financial pressure on the
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, causing the
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cost cutting
on other areas such as social welfare.

Definitely, free
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university
education would appeal every
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students
,
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but
we cannot
recklessly
finance all
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students
when social resource is
being concerned
. The
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government
should
strategically
allocate the limited financial resource to the
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student
who has actual need.
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IELTS essay University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. v. 9

Essay
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4 paragraphs
322 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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