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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. v. 1
Since the advent of online networking platforms, there has been an ongoing debate on its effect on individuals and the general public. Some say these social platforms have a bad influence on humankind, this essay disagree completely with this statement because these platforms have eliminated distance barrier and also help to create an online community of like-minds. Although, social interactive websites have reduced face to face communication among people, it has removed distance limitation the public suffered years back. These days, with the help of social networking sites, conversation is made possible between two or more persons in different geographical locations. For example, business meetings can take place between partners located in different continents over Skype, moreover, all they need to connect are their Skype IDs, computers and internet supplies. In summary, online interactive platforms have bring people together more than it has separated us. In addition, these social platforms have helped to create community of like-minds. Furthermore, people with shared professional or political interest have formed an online interactive forums which have helped in forging their course. For instance, LinkedIn is a professional networking website where professionals of diverse background interact with one another without being in the same location. Twitter is another example; in Nigeria, Twitter is also known to be a protest platform for whoever wants to speak up against any policy of the government. In conclusion, I believe that social media has impacted its users, as well as the entire public positively because it has eliminated distance between us and has given the people an opportunity to commune effectively.
Since the advent of
online
networking
platforms
, there has been an ongoing debate on its effect on individuals and the
general public
.
Some
say these
social
platforms
have a
bad
influence on humankind,
this essay disagree
completely with this statement
because
these
platforms
have eliminated distance barrier and
also
help
to create an
online
community of like-minds.

Although,
social
interactive websites have
reduced
face to face communication among
people
, it has removed distance limitation the public suffered years back. These days, with the
help
of
social
networking sites, conversation
is made
possible between two or more persons in
different
geographical locations.
For example
, business meetings can take place between partners located in
different
continents over Skype,
moreover
, all they need to connect are their Skype IDs, computers and internet supplies. In summary,
online
interactive
platforms
have
bring
people
together more than it has separated us.

In addition
, these
social
platforms
have
helped
to create community of like-minds.
Furthermore
,
people
with shared professional or political interest have formed an
online
interactive
forums
which have
helped
in forging their course.
For instance
, LinkedIn is a professional networking website where professionals of diverse background interact with one another without being in the same location. Twitter is another example; in Nigeria, Twitter is
also
known to be a protest
platform
for whoever wants to speak up against any policy of the
government
.

In conclusion
, I believe that
social
media has impacted its users,
as well
as the entire public
positively
because
it has eliminated distance between us and has
given
the
people
an opportunity to commune
effectively
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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