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University education should be free for everyone. Agree or disagree

University education should be free for everyone. Agree or disagree PrPWw

The future is coming, the growth of civilization has been increasing rapidly and the prevention of poverty is almost impossible. Like education, some countries might provide children with education until high school. However, what about after that? We have to be living under decent circumstances to afford university expenses. This problem has been debating for a while as to whether make college tuition-free for everyone or to keep it in the same direction as now.

The future is coming, the growth of civilization has been increasing rapidly
 and the prevention of poverty is almost impossible. Like education, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 countries might provide children with education until high school. However
, what about after that? We This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be living under decent circumstances to afford university expenses. This problem has been debating for a while Consider shortening this phrase to just "whether", or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to".whether
as to whether
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 college tuition-free for everyone or to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 it in the same direction as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
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. 

IELTS essay University education should be free for everyone. Agree or disagree

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American English

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