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In some cities and towns all over the world, volume of traffic is increased what are the causes and solution

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It is believable that all over the world traffic congestion became the biggest problem. here by there are some reasons and solutions that are explained in this essay. There are mainly two reasons to increased traffic problem firstly increased in population, the usage of both public and private transport is also increased. the other reason is the lack of planning of roads for instance improper usage of signals leads to accidents. this may result in traffic jams all over the road until it is cleared. The another reason is parking the vehicles in no parking areas or in between the roads. However, government has to implement some rules to eradicate the causes of accidents, caused due to misguiding the traffic rules. There are two solutions firstly, charge the fine when ever a person regulates the rules or signals. Secondly everyone is responsible for to avoid increased traffic problem by parking the vehicles in only parking areas. A part from that, government also implement some rules for pedestrians and disabled people while crossing the roads such as in zebra crossing lines only. To sum up this every one is responsible to maintain a clear environment rather than having a traffic congestion problems
It is believable that all over the world
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congestion became the biggest
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problem
.
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here
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some
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reasons
and solutions that are
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traffic
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problem
firstly
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increased
in population, the usage of both public and private transport is
also
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increased
.
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the
other
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reason
is the lack of planning of roads
for instance
improper usage of signals leads to accidents.
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this
may result in
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traffic
jams all over the road until it
is cleared
. The another
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reason
is
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parking
the vehicles in no
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parking
areas or in between the roads.

However
,
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government
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has to
implement
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some
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rules
to eradicate the causes of accidents, caused due to misguiding the
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traffic
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rules
. There are two solutions
firstly
, charge the fine when ever a person regulates the
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rules
or signals.
Secondly
everyone is responsible for to avoid
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increased
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traffic
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problem
by
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parking
the vehicles in
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only
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parking
areas.

A part from that,
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government
also
implement
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some
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rules
for pedestrians and disabled
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people
while crossing the roads such as in zebra crossing lines
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only
.

To sum up this every one is responsible to maintain a
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clear
environment
rather
than having a
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traffic
congestion
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problems
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IELTS essay In some cities and towns all over the world, volume of traffic is increased what are the causes and solution

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
200 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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