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Jovenel Moïse: Police kill four after Haiti's president assassinated

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A deadly gun battle between police and the men suspected of assassinating Haiti's President Jovenel Moïse has been raging in Port-au-Prince. Police chief Léon Charles said four suspects had been killed and two detained but some remained at large and a manhunt was still under way. "They will be killed or captured, " the police chief said. Mr Moïse, 53, was fatally shot and his wife was injured when attackers stormed their home early on Wednesday. Police chief Charles described dramatic scenes as officers confronted the alleged assassins. "We blocked [the suspects] en route as they left the scene of the crime, " he told a news conference. "Since then, we have been battling with them. "
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suspected of assassinating Haiti's President
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Jovenel
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has been raging in Port-au-Prince.

Police chief
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and two detained
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remained at large and a manhunt was
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or captured,
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the police chief said.

Mr
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Moïse
, 53, was
fatally
shot and his wife
was injured
when attackers stormed their home early on Wednesday.

Police chief Charles
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described
dramatic scenes as officers confronted the alleged assassins.

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We blocked [the suspects] en route as they
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the scene of the crime,
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he
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a news conference.
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Since then, we have been battling with them.
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IELTS essay Jovenel Moïse: Police kill four after Haiti's president assassinated

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
116 words
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