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University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is considered that high education should be without payment for all. Although, in some specifical contexts, I disagree with this statement, I argue that by and large, all student should study free of charge. It is known that education is one of the mainstays of society. Today, both paid and free education is available in many countries around the world. Of course, for all higher education institutions to be free, they must be funded by the state. However, it is clear that the state can provide limited funding. Therefore, if there is no paid education and private universities, many students who want to study will be deprived of this right. In addition, paid universities have better conditions and are equipped with advanced technologies. Also, a student who pays money takes classes more seriously. Consequently, all these affect the level of education. On the other hand, paid education has some disadvantages. Thus, people with low financial means, but want to get an education, cannot get an education or leave university for this reason. For instance, literate students can not pay the tuition fees and they have to leave the university. As a result, the state is deprived of the potential of educated personnel. Thus, the balance of justice in society is disturbed. With this in mind, higher education is free in many countries, such as Saudi Arabia, the United Arab Emirates, Kuwait, Norway, Sweden, Denmark and Finland. As a result, although I agree with paid education in a sense, I mostly believe that free education is more beneficial for people and for state.
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is considered
that high
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education
should be without payment for all. Although, in
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some
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specifical
contexts, I disagree with this statement, I argue that by and large, all
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student
should study
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free
of charge.

It
is known
that
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education
is one of the mainstays of society.
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Today
, both
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paid
and
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free
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education
is available in
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many
countries around the world.
Of course
, for all higher
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education
institutions to be
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free
, they
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must
be funded
by the
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state
.
However
, it is
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clear
that the
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state
can provide limited funding.
Therefore
, if there is no
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paid
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education
and private
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universities
,
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many
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students
who want to study will
be deprived
of this right.
In addition
,
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paid
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universities
have better conditions and
are equipped
with advanced technologies.
Also
, a
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student
who pays money takes classes more
seriously
.
Consequently
, all these affect the level of education.

On the other hand
,
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paid
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education
has
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some
disadvantages.
Thus
,
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people
with low financial means,
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but
want to
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get
an
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education
, cannot
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get
an
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education
or
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leave
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university
for this reason
.
For instance
, literate
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students
can not pay the tuition
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fees and
they
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have to
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leave
the
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university
.
As a result
, the
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state
is deprived
of the potential of educated personnel.
Thus
, the balance of justice in society
is disturbed
. With this in mind, higher
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education
is
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free
in
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many
countries, such as Saudi Arabia, the United Arab Emirates, Kuwait, Norway, Sweden, Denmark and Finland.

As a result
, although I
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agree
with
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paid
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education
in a sense, I
mostly
believe that
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free
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education
is more beneficial for
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people
and for
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state
.
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IELTS essay University education should be free for all students.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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