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University education should be free, to what extent do you agree or disagree?

University education should be free, 7w33
Studying at universities requires students to pay hefty tuition fees, which is not affordable for all students, so according to some, universities ought to be free for all students regardless of their background. In my opinion, I agree with the idea of free education as it greatly benefits both the individuals and society, as will now be discussed. One good reason to abolish university fees is that it gives people, whether they are rich or poor equal rights. At present, poor students who cannot afford to pay fees are deprived of getting a tertiary education. This excludes a significant portion of society and is discriminatory, which can be avoided by getting rid of tuition fees. Another point to consider is that having no fees at university means that students do not need to work at the same time as studying to cover their costs. In the UK, for instance, 75% of all students have to work either full-time or part-time while studying at universities to pay their fees. Free higher education should, therefore, produce better results as students will be able to afford and apply themselves to their studies exclusively. Finally, fee education will benefit society in the long run, for the simple reason that it will open up higher education to a wider section of the population. This will result in an increasing number of educated people. To illustrate, having a greater resource of skilled and knowledgeable professionals will bring greater rewards to society as a whole. Moreover, it will bring more advantages to a country that shows itself to be prosperous and leading in various fields. In conclusion, free university education is a must for any country that values equal rights and one that wishes to advance.
Studying at
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requires
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students
to pay hefty tuition
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fees
, which is not affordable for all
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students
,
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according to
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,
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ought to be
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for all
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students
regardless of their background. In my opinion, I
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agree
with the
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idea
of
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free
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education
as it
greatly
benefits both the individuals and
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society
, as will
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now
be discussed
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One
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good
reason to abolish
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university
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fees
is that it gives
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people
, whether they are rich or poor equal rights. At present, poor
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students
who cannot afford to pay
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fees
are deprived
of getting a tertiary
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education
. This excludes a significant portion of
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society
and is discriminatory, which can
be avoided
by getting rid of tuition fees.

Another point to consider is that having no
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fees
at
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university
means that
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students
do not need to work at the same time as studying to cover their costs. In the UK,
for instance
, 75% of all
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students
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have to
work either full-time or part-time while studying at
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universities
to pay their
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fees
.
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Free
higher
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education
should,
therefore
, produce better results as
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students
will be able to afford and apply themselves to their studies exclusively.

Finally
,
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fee
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education
will benefit
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society
in the long run, for the simple reason that it will open up higher
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education
to a wider section of the population. This will result in an increasing number of educated
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people
. To illustrate, having a greater resource of skilled and knowledgeable professionals will bring greater rewards to
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society
as a whole.
Moreover
, it will bring more advantages to a country that
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shows
itself to be prosperous and leading in various fields.

In conclusion
,
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free
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university
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education
is a
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must
for any country that values equal rights and one that wishes to advance.
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IELTS essay University education should be free,

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
289 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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