University education should be free. Do you agree or disagree? Why? Use examples and reasons to develop your argument. v.1
University education should be free. Why? Use examples and reasons to develop your argument. v. 1
It is generally accepted that young volunteers contribute to a better society. While some believe that unpaid work is not as good as paid ones, I strongly agree that teenagers working for free will become excellent professionals due to character building, and the community will be more developed because the government will reduce its expenses.
Firstly, volunteering develops a sense of responsibility within teens. Owing to the fact that young people will learn how to work diligently and carefully, working without expecting nothing in return will develop character and ethics. As a result, the community will train hard working professionals without thinking about income in the first place. To illustrate, a recent study from the University of Davis found that young volunteers from a local church were willing to work harder and more careful after graduation compared to the general public. So it is clear that unpaid work is the foundation to develop a good professional.
Secondly, besides the professional and personal benefits, volunteers work on duties that the government cannot do by themselves. In other words, it is very expensive to maintain a proper community taking into account economics, violence rate, education and other metrics. Consequently, any additional help, such as volunteering, is welcome to help the local community. For example, I lived in a small city where volunteers were constantly taking care of baggers and homeless people and this simple activity reduced the local violence rate. It is evident that when people help each other without further estate costs, creates a more peaceful and harmonious society.
In conclusion, by working for free with the goal of developing the local community, teenagers will gain character, and society will benefit without depending too much on the government.
It is
generally
accepted
that young
volunteers
contribute to a better society. While
some
believe that unpaid
work
is not as
good
as paid ones, I
strongly
agree
that
teenagers
working
for free will become excellent professionals due to character building, and the
community
will be more developed
because
the
government
will
reduce
its expenses.
Firstly
, volunteering develops a sense of responsibility within teens. Owing to the fact that young
people
will learn how to
work
diligently
and
carefully
,
working
without expecting nothing in return will develop character and ethics.
As a result
, the
community
will train
hard
working
professionals without thinking about income in the
first
place. To illustrate, a recent study from the University of Davis found that young
volunteers
from a
local
church were willing to
work
harder and more careful after graduation compared to the
general public
.
So
it is
clear
that unpaid
work
is the foundation to develop a
good
professional.
Secondly
,
besides
the professional and personal benefits,
volunteers
work
on duties that the
government
cannot do by themselves.
In other words
, it is
very
expensive to maintain a proper
community
taking into account economics, violence rate, education and other metrics.
Consequently
, any additional
help
, such as volunteering, is welcome to
help
the
local
community
.
For example
, I
lived
in a
small
city where
volunteers
were
constantly
taking care of
baggers
and homeless
people
and this simple activity
reduced
the
local
violence rate. It is evident that when
people
help
each other without
further
estate costs, creates a more peaceful and harmonious society.
In conclusion
, by
working
for free with the goal of developing the
local
community
,
teenagers
will gain character, and society will benefit without depending too much on the
government
.
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