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university education more important than developing soft skills

university education more important than developing soft skills pX06d

There is no doubt that these days majority of population got there high degree. The question is university degree as important as development of personal skills? In this essay, I am going to discuss both side of the argument in details and provide my opinion. It is commonly believed that, university education consider as a complimentary. Therefor many parents saving there money in case if there children did not get the chance for a scholarship. To illustrate, is it often thought that university studying are totally different kind of experience. It dose build a strong personality, teach how to mange the time also, reading lots of subjects help in expose minds to many area. In other words, there was a research article found 90% of people have a bachelor degree but some of them are unemployed or have a job with low income. This is because, the numbers of graduated student much more than jobs offers. However, some people support that experience and improving hobbies has become popular nowadays. Firstly, they start in a young age working in part time jobs followed by building there own companies and make lot of money compare to who work under government. Secondly, the have an extry time to develop themselves while the other half of the day spent working for other and get a constant amount of money monthly. In conclusion, Although higher education consider unique. and give a better way of dealing with pressure. therefor, I believe it is not necessary as long as human can improve himself.

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different
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 give a better way of dealing with pressure. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTherefor
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, I believe it is not necessary as long as human can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 himself. 