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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.12

Men and women should be offered for accepting in equilibrium number by Universities. This essay will disagree with this assertion because in some sector specific gender plays an imperative role than other and for this reason some meritorious students will be deprived. Some particular courses are suitable for one gender rather than other and it will be whimsical idea if authorities will allow the eqal opportunity. For instance, engineering is preferable for men as they are more diligent and sedulous than opposite one. However, gynecology nursing is particularly suitable for women for their scrupulousness and patience. Although nowadays women's aptitude are trying to prove their proficiency in every sphere of education, they confront with the problem in their workstation in addition male are inappropriate for specific profession. For implementing the equal number of gender in all courses, some intelligent competitors will be underprivileged due to lack of opportunity. If universities explore rules for equilibrium, the person who deserves a seat for particular subject will destitute and instead of him unmerited one of opposite competitor will acquire this position as a consequence, the university lose condign one and give chance to the ineligible one so that they produce relatively unworthy graduate. For example, in case of engineering subject by following this precedent 50% female graduate will be passed every year, but they are unable to perform like male counterparts on the contrary for them other person defeated their chance to prove his worth. In conclusion, I disagree with the statement of equality of gender discrimination in every course in university since each one is not perfectly suitable for every carter as well as everyone is not equally meritorious.

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 as they are more diligent and sedulous than opposite one. However
, gynecology nursing is particularly
 suitable for women for their scrupulousness and patience. Although nowadays women's aptitude are trying to prove their proficiency in every sphere of education, they confront with the problem in their workstation in addition
 male are inappropriate for specific profession.

For implementing the equal number of gender in all courses, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 intelligent competitors will be underprivileged
 due to lack of opportunity. If You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
universities
 explore This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 for equilibrium, the person who deserves a seat for particular subject will destitute and instead
 of him unmerited one of opposite competitor will acquire this position as a consequence, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
 lose condign one and give chance to the ineligible one This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 that they produce relatively
 unworthy graduate. For example
, in case of engineering subject by following this precedent 50% female graduate will be passed
 every year, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they are unable to perform like male counterparts on the contrary
 for them other person defeated their chance to prove his worth.

In conclusion
, I disagree with the statement of equality of gender discrimination in every course in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
 since each one is not perfectly
 suitable for every carter as well
 as everyone is not equally
 meritorious. 