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Universities abroad are very demanding rigid leaving students with very little time to have a social life. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement express your opinion.

Universities abroad are very demanding rigid leaving students with very little time to have a social life. How far express your opinion. gbn73

What you do today is your future. Many of them dream to study abroad, because it gives you a life changing experience. Numerous universities abroad offer different courses of tower interest, as well as internships ande part time jobs. Moreover they get to know the new culture, see the world find new interest which makes their schedule engaged. They say going is the goal. Due to their lively activities many students sacrifice their social life but this helps in their personal development. Every talk you complete gets you closer to your goal and makes you think out of the box. Although it makes students home sick, pressurise to make monthly expenses and spend high cost on courses of their interest students mostly spend their time in completing these needs and gradually lose their social life.

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