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Nowadays, many working people prefer fast food over home-made food. Do you think disadvantages of this outweigh advantages?

Nowadays, many working people prefer fast food over home-made food. Do you think disadvantages of this outweigh advantages? W8V2q
In modern times, the preference of working people is being changed. Therefore, the popularity of junk food is rising among such group in comparison of cooked food at home. This essay provides justification of the advantages which are significantly higher than its disadvantages owing to the fact that save time for working people, more choices are available in fast food. There are plethora of reasons for consuming fast food. The first reason of eating preserved food is time saving. To explain the Prepration and cooking time of these food is comparatively less than home cooking. Another reason behind consuming junk food is different varieties of delicacies are available to choose from street markets. Due to this job going people can easily attracted by its delicious taste and availability within shorter time. The last but not least, numerous online food serving application and current that do not only provide door step delivery but also exicting advertising offers to lure customer, this is significant as a more convenient options for folks surrounded by heavy workload. For example, swiggy and zometo are the best food supplying platform to deliver at any corner of city. In spite of having plethora of benefits of consuming street food, it also has few drawbacks. Firstly, the poor quality of junk food makes them unhealthy to eat. For instances, if employees consume it, they indirectly invite many stomach problem such as food poisoning and indigestion, because in many packed food the preservation are added as an ingredient and ultimately, it is dangerous in a long run. For example, processed items can cause high cholesterol level followed by obesity. Lastly, regular intake junk food stuffs are not pocket-friendly, whereas home cooking is more reliable in terms of budget and freshness. To conclude, although I reiterate that junk food is definitely better in order to conveniency and a number of varieties, but it's few health results are not to be overlooked
In modern
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, the preference of working
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people
is being
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changed
.
Therefore
, the popularity of
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junk
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food
is rising among such group
in comparison
of cooked
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food
at home. This essay provides justification of the advantages which are
significantly
higher than its disadvantages owing to the fact that save
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time
for working
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people
, more choices are available in
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fast
food.

There are plethora of reasons for consuming
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fast
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food
. The
first
reason of eating preserved
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food
is
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time
saving. To
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explain
the
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Prepration
and cooking
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time
of these
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food
is
comparatively
less than home cooking. Another reason behind consuming
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junk
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food
is
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different
varieties of delicacies are available to choose from street markets. Due to this job going
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people
can
easily
attracted by its delicious taste and availability within shorter
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time
. The last
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but
not least, numerous online
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food
serving application and
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current
that do not
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only
provide door step delivery
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but
also
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exicting
advertising offers to lure customer, this is significant as a more convenient options for folks surrounded by heavy workload.
For example
,
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swiggy
and
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zometo
are the best
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food
supplying platform to deliver at any corner of city.

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In spite of
having plethora of benefits of consuming street
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food
, it
also
has few drawbacks.
Firstly
, the poor quality of
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junk
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food
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makes
them unhealthy to eat. For instances, if employees consume it, they
indirectly
invite
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many
stomach problem such as
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food
poisoning and indigestion,
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because
in
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many
packed
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food
the preservation are
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added
as an ingredient and
ultimately
, it is
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dangerous
in a long run.
For example
, processed items can cause high cholesterol level followed by obesity.
Lastly
, regular intake
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junk
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food
stuffs are not pocket-friendly, whereas home cooking is more reliable in terms of budget and freshness.

To conclude
, although I reiterate that
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junk
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food
is definitely better in order to
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conveniency
and a number of varieties,
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but
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it's
few health results are not to
be overlooked
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IELTS essay Nowadays, many working people prefer fast food over home-made food. Do you think disadvantages of this outweigh advantages?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
320 words
6.0
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