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Unfortunately, this is also made worse by the fact that there is more pollution and lower quality produce than ever before. Air in certain larger cities is of very poor quality, so much, that running in Paris on a weekday is as bad for your lung as smoking a cigarette. Along with this, food is being grown in soil already destroyed by years of bad farming practices, thus causing it to be less healthy and potentially harmful for us.

Unfortunately, this is also made worse by the fact that there is more pollution and lower quality produce than ever before. Air in certain larger cities is of very poor quality, so much, that running in Paris on a weekday is as bad for your lung as smoking a cigarette. Along with this, food is being grown in soil already destroyed by years of bad farming practices, thus causing it to be less healthy and potentially harmful for us. YL9WB
The musical life of the Church of St Nicholas from the first half of the XIX century up to the beginning of the XXI century. Unfortunately, this is also made worse by the fact that there is more pollution and lower quality produce than ever before. Air in certain larger cities is of very poor quality, so much, that running in Paris on a weekday is as bad for your lung as smoking a cigarette. Along with this, food is being grown in soil already destroyed by years of bad farming practices, thus causing it to be less healthy and potentially harmful for us.
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half of the XIX century up to the beginning of the XXI century. Unfortunately, this is
also
made worse by the fact that there is more pollution and lower quality produce than ever
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IELTS essay Unfortunately, this is also made worse by the fact that there is more pollution and lower quality produce than ever before. Air in certain larger cities is of very poor quality, so much, that running in Paris on a weekday is as bad for your lung as smoking a cigarette. Along with this, food is being grown in soil already destroyed by years of bad farming practices, thus causing it to be less healthy and potentially harmful for us.

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