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Unemployment:A curse or boon?

Unemployment:A curse or boon? RyVW8
Unemployment is a very serious issue not only in India but in the whole world. There are hundreds and thousands of people out there who do not have employment. Besides, the problems of unemployment are very severe in India because of the growing population and demand for jobs. Moreover, if we neglect this problem then it will be going to become the reason for the doom of the nation. What is Unemployment? Unemployment refers to a situation in which a skilled and talented people wanted to do a job. But cannot find a proper job due to several reasons. Types of Unemployment Now we know what is unemployment but unemployment does not only mean that the person does not have a job. Likewise, unemployment also includes people working in areas out of their expertise. The various types of unemployment include disguised unemployment, seasonal unemployment, open unemployment, technological unemployment, structural unemployment. Besides, some other unemployment is cyclic unemployment, educated unemployment, underemployment, frictional unemployment, chronic unemployment, and casual unemployment. Above all, seasonal unemployment, under unemployment, and disguised unemployment are the most common unemployment that is found in India. Reasons for Unemployment In a country like India, there is much reason for a large section of the population for being unemployed. Some of these factors are population growth, slow economic growth, seasonal occupation, slow growth of the economic sector, and fall in the cottage industry. Moreover, these are the major reason for unemployment in India. Also, the situation has become so drastic that highly educated people are ready to do the job of a sweeper. Besides, the government is not doing his work seriously. Apart from all these, a large portion of the population is engaged in the agricultural sector and the sector only provides employment in harvest or plantation time. In addition, the biggest reason of unemployment in India is its vast population which demands a large number of jobs every year which the government and authorities are unable to provide. Consequences of Unemployment If things will go on like the current scenario then unemployment will become a major issue. Apart from this, the following things happen in an economy which is an increase in poverty, an increase in crime rate, exploitation of labor, political instability, mental health, and loss of skills. As a result, all this will eventually lead to the demise of the nation. Initiative by Government The government has taken the problem very seriously and have taken measures to slowly reduce unemployment. Some of these schemes includes IRDP (Integrated Rural Development Programme), DPAP (Drought Prone Area Programme), Jawahar Rozgar Yojana, Employment Assurance Scheme, NRY (Nehru Rozgar Yojana), Training for self-Employment, PMIUPEP (Prime Minister’s Integrated Urban Poverty Eradication Program), employment exchange, Employment Guarantee Scheme, development of organized sector, small and cottage industries, employment in forging countries, and Jawahar Gram Samridhi Yojana and few more. Besides, these schemes the government also make some rules flexible, so that employment can be created in the private sector also. To conclude, we can say that the problem of unemployment in India has reached a critical stage. But, now the government and local authorities have taken the problem seriously and working on it to reduce unemployment. Also, to completely solve the issue of unemployment we have to tackle the main issue of unemployment that is the vast population of India.
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Moreover
, if we neglect this
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problem
then it will be going to become the
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reason
for the doom of the nation.

What is Unemployment?

Unemployment refers to a situation in which a skilled and talented
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people
wanted to do a
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job
.
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cannot find a proper
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job
due to several reasons.

Types of Unemployment

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mean that the person does not have a
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,
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includes
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people
working in areas out of their expertise.

The various types of
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include disguised
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, seasonal
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, open
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, technological
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, structural
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other
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is cyclic
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, educated
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, underemployment, frictional
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, chronic
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, and casual unemployment.

Above all
, seasonal
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, under
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, and disguised
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are the most common
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unemployment
that
is found
in India.

Reasons for Unemployment

In a country like India, there is much
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reason
for a large section of the
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population
for
being unemployed
.
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Some
of these factors are
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population
growth, slow economic growth, seasonal occupation, slow growth of the economic
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sector
, and fall in the cottage industry.

Moreover
, these are the major
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reason
for
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unemployment
in India.
Also
, the situation has become
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drastic that
highly
educated
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people
are ready to do the
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job
of a sweeper.
Besides
, the
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government
is not doing his work
seriously
.

Apart from all these, a large portion of the
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population
is engaged
in the agricultural
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sector
and the
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provides
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employment
in harvest or plantation time.

In addition
, the biggest
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of
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unemployment
in India is its vast
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population
which demands
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a large number of
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jobs
every year which the
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government
and authorities are unable to provide.

Consequences of Unemployment

If things will go on like the
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current
scenario then
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unemployment
will become a major
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issue
. Apart from this, the following things happen in an economy which is an increase in poverty, an increase in crime rate, exploitation of labor, political instability, mental health, and loss of
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skills
.
As a result
, all this will
eventually
lead to the demise of the nation.

Initiative by
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Government


The
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has taken the
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very
seriously
and have taken measures to
slowly
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reduce
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.
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Some
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schemes
includes
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IRDP
(Integrated Rural Development
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DPAP
(Drought Prone Area
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Jawahar
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Rozgar
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Yojana
,
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Assurance
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,
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NRY
(Nehru
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Rozgar
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Yojana
), Training for self-Employment,
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PMIUPEP
(Prime Minister’s Integrated Urban Poverty Eradication Program),
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employment
exchange,
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Guarantee
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, development of organized
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sector
,
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small
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employment
in forging countries, and
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Jawahar
Gram
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Samridhi
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Yojana
and few more.

Besides
, these
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in India has reached a critical stage.
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,
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seriously
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IELTS essay Unemployment:A curse or boon?

Essay
  American English
14 paragraphs
555 words
6.0
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