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There is an increase in the demand for food globally. Why is this and what solution can government take to tackle this?

There is an increase in the demand for food globally. Why is this and what solution can government take to tackle this? 6dLpj
It has been noticed that across the globe, the demand for food is on the rise. This essay examines the reason for this and possible solution's government take to resolve this problem. A major reason for the rising food demand worldwide is the growing global population. The world's population is growing at a geometric rate, while the food output is growing at arithmetic rate. This has led to a massive shortfall in supply. For instance, I read awhile ago online that Chine, with over 1. 8 billion people may not be able to feed its population by 2025, if something is not done to check birth rate. However, a way government can deal with this is by introducing birth control policies. People should be educated on the dangers of having more children than the available resources such as food. They should be encouraged to take part in family planning. To illustrate, in 2016 United Nation Report indicates that since 1950 when countries in Western Europe introduced birth control measures, they have never suffered food scarcity. In addition, government should be encouraged to mechanize agriculture. Adopting better farming practices alongside commercial farming will lead to increased output in agriculture. This, in the long run may help solve the problem of food demand. In conclusion, the rise in food demand can be attributed to increasing world population. To solve this problem governments should introduce birth control policies and encourage mechanized farming.
It has
been noticed
that across the globe, the demand for
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food
is on the rise. This essay examines the reason for this and possible solution's
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government
take to resolve this problem.

A major reason for the rising
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food
demand worldwide is the growing global
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population
. The world's
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population
is growing at a geometric rate, while the
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food
output is growing at arithmetic rate. This has led to a massive shortfall in supply.
For instance
, I read awhile ago online that Chine, with over 1. 8 billion
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people
may not be able to feed its
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population
by 2025, if something is not done to
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check
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birth
rate.

However
, a way
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government
can deal with this is by introducing
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birth
control policies.
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People
should
be educated
on the
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dangers
of having more children than the available resources such as
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food
. They should
be encouraged
to
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take part
in family planning. To illustrate, in 2016 United Nation Report indicates that since 1950 when countries in Western Europe introduced
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birth
control measures, they have never suffered
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food
scarcity.

In addition
,
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government
should
be encouraged
to mechanize agriculture. Adopting better farming practices alongside commercial farming will lead to increased output in agriculture. This, in the long run may
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help
solve the problem of
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food
demand.

In conclusion
, the rise in
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food
demand can
be attributed
to increasing world
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population
. To solve this problem
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governments
should introduce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
birth
control policies and encourage mechanized farming.
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IELTS essay There is an increase in the demand for food globally. Why is this and what solution can government take to tackle this?

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