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Undoubtedly, news plays a great role in our life to inform on what is happening in our surroundings

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Undoubtedly, news plays a great role in our life to inform on what is happening in our surroundings. Hence a precise and true awareness of its content helps us make a better decision. A controversial question has been aroused which types of media should be read or watched? A number of experts prefer to study ones whose viewpoints are similar to our ideas. however, several specialists think that the opposite is true. as far as l am concerned, the latter opinion is better. I will elaborate on my reason in the following paragraphs. To begin with, the first and foremost reason that l will put forward is that reading information from different perspectives helps correctly understand facts. As all know, nowadays, public thoughts have a considerable effect on supporting political, economic, or social issues. Hence, it is reasonable that political parties and other social groups will continuously attempt to change others ’ ideas in line with their own interests. in this way, different communicating non-communicating tools are applied by individuals to meet these goals so that it sometimes leads to distorting a phenomenon in the shape that wrong activities appear as right. Under this circumstance, studying and comparing the same event in different media pave the route to understand what really happened. Another noteworthy point that I will consider is that studying different views assists to extend our knowledge. It is a dispensable fact that various persons see an event through a diverse lens due to the fact that they have various backgrounds and fields. Hence, knowing how people analyze special events, help identify our weakness and powerful and boost analyzing skill. These skills- are vital in the modern era. Because nowadays human's challenges are so complicated to the extent that individuals should enable to see problems from a different angle. To be specific, according to the fierce competition in a job- market. , these abilities give a competitive edge and make people more employable. my Personal experience is a merit example in this regard. I always see social problems • from- economic view sometime • hence I critic the • government ■ because do not perform affordability' but -when studding another opinion I understand I did not judge correctly. in addition in the modern era. put in brief, according to above mentioned it can be concluded that studying and watching media that its ideas are similar to our ones can be effective for expanding our knowledge and help to understand truthness
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us
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a better decision. A controversial question has
been aroused
which types of media should
be read
or
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watched
? A number of experts prefer to study
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ones
whose viewpoints are similar to our
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ideas
.
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however
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that the opposite is true.
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as
far as l
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, the latter opinion is better. I will elaborate on my reason in the following paragraphs.

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begin
with, the
first
and foremost reason that l will put forward is that reading information from
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different
perspectives
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helps
correctly
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understand
facts. As all know, nowadays, public thoughts have a considerable effect on supporting political, economic, or social issues.
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, it is reasonable that political parties and other social groups will
continuously
attempt to
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change
others
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ideas
in line with their
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own
interests.
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in
this way,
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different
communicating non-communicating tools
are applied
by individuals to
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meet
these goals
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wrong
activities appear as right. Under this circumstance, studying and comparing the same
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event
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different
media pave the route to
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understand
what
really
happened.

Another noteworthy point that I will consider is that studying
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different
views assists to extend our knowledge. It is a dispensable fact that various persons
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see
an
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event
through a diverse lens due to the fact that they have various backgrounds and fields.

Hence
, knowing how
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people
analyze special
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people
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my
Personal experience is a merit example in this regard. I always
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see
social problems • from- economic view sometime •
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I critic the •
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government
■
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because
do not perform affordability'
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I did not judge
correctly
.
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in
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addition
in the modern era.

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, according to above mentioned it can
be concluded
that studying and watching media that its
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ideas
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ones
can be effective for expanding our knowledge and
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IELTS essay Undoubtedly, news plays a great role in our life to inform on what is happening in our surroundings

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
411 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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