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UK acid rain emission measured by four different sectors

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In 1991 over 3 million tons acid rain limited by electricity gas and water supply it followed decreasing trend with some fluctuations for a period in addition to eat Other industries limited more than 2 million an acid rain it was constant between 1991 and 1993 after that it full gradually which was accounted for approximately 1. 5 million done in the last year the figure for Acid Rain emitted from trans transport and domestic was similar at around 0. 5 million tonnes in the initial year then it remained constant till 1995
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tonnes in the initial year then it remained constant till 1995
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IELTS essay UK acid rain emission measured by four different sectors

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