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two plans for the grand park

two plans for the grand park 736JX

A glance at the two plans provides the overall view of the public park and shows the changes between 1920 and today. It can be seen that the grand park is at the renowned place Arnold avenue and its have two entranceway into the park. Also, the shape of the park is the same as before, but it has some sort of changes in a layout that provides excellent accommodation for public access. In contrast, However, there is a big change in the centre point of the park that is a rose garden, also some sort of seats around the rose garden area those has not in the previous layout. Currently, the previous fountain changed into a water feature at the right bottom side of the park and the same location has an underground car park. On the other side, the park has been introducing Amphitheatre for concerts replaced by a musician stage. Thus, it is interesting to note that the park view and accommodation is more perfect compared with its previous plan.

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park
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shows
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changes
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today
.

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seen
 that the grand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 is at the renowned place Arnold avenue and its have two Possible agreement error. The noun 'entranceway' seems to be countable, so consider using: "entranceways".entranceways
entranceway
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park
. Also
, the shape of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
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before
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but
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some
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changes
 in a layout that provides excellent accommodation for public access.

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big
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change
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centre
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park
that is
 a rose garden, also
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some
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those has
 not in the previous layout. Currently
, the previous fountain This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into a water feature at the right bottom side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and the same location has an underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. On the other side, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has been introducing Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.Amphitheater
Amphitheatre
 for concerts replaced by a musician stage.

Thus
, it is interesting to note that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 view and accommodation is more perfect compared with its previous plan. 