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Traveling with or without a tour guide?

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Traveling is one of the most pleasures of our life, always is a new adventure and explore a new place. Some feel better if there is a tour guide to conduce and show the places, while others, prefer discover by themselves. Personally, I disagree with the statement, I believe that traveling without a tour guide is better. I feel this way for some reasons that I will explain in the following essay. First, traveling by yourself give you more freedom to go wherever you want. If you have to be with the tour guide, some people will choose to go a one place that maybe you do not want, as a result, you may be frustared, because you paid for the vacation and consequently you want to enjoy in your own way. For instance, when I was teenager, me and my family have been in Spain for couple days, we decided to pay a tour guide for show us the city. However, we did not expect that more people will joint us. As a result, we did not enjoyed how much we wanted. If we had tourist by ourselves, we would visited all the places that we wanted, with no rush and have time for appreciate the places. Second, a tour guide normally costs a lot money, they can charge by person. In conclusion,
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to conduce and
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show
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places
, while others, prefer discover by themselves.
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, I disagree with the statement, I believe that traveling without a
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tour
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is better. I feel this way for
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reasons that I will
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be with the
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,
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will choose to go a one
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you paid for the vacation and
consequently
you want to enjoy in your
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own
way.
For instance
, when I was
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teenager
, me and my family have been in Spain for couple days, we decided to pay a
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tour
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guide
for
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show
us the city.
However
, we did not
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expect
that more
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people
will joint us.
As a result
, we did not
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enjoyed
how much we wanted. If we had tourist by ourselves, we would
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visited
all the
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places
that we wanted, with no rush and have time for appreciate the places.

Second, a
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normally
costs
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IELTS essay Traveling with or without a tour guide?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
224 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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