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Traveling alone or on a tour...

Traveling alone or on a tour... 6N2wB
When traveling you acquire really good memories, but also learn from them. On certain occasions traveling teaches you a lot more things than school. You gain knowledge talking to people who live in new places, getting to know their way of thinking, traditions, and maybe some stories about their ancestors. As surprising as it may sound it also upskills a lot about yourself, how you feel about foreign people and their culture, it for sure makes you more confident because you will experience things for the first time and you may discover that you are stronger and smarter than what you expected. But, it also depends on how and with whom you are traveling, alone or on a tour. So no matter the countries you visit, traveling alone gets more threatening every year, therefore, prior to going on a trip, you always need to look at the advantages and disadvantages about the decisions you take and the safety that place can provide you. Touring is one the best experiences, if not the best one, that exists. Just imagine how amazing it is to go from one place to another, and having the time of your life in a journey that will make you feel things you have never felt. So that is why traveling has one of the biggest impacts in the world economy, there are a lot of reports that show that the Travel & Tourism sector experienced 3. 5% growth in 2019 (World Travel & Tourism Council). Over the past years, a lot of jobs were created, making Travel & Tourism the best partner for governments to generate employment. These reports help us provide public and private sectors with solid evidence of the huge worth this brings to the economy. Some of the countries that make the highest amount of money from tourism are France, the United Kingdom, Italy and Thailand. But traveling sounds really fun until you realise how expensive it is, and even more if you are going on your own; when you travel alone there are a few good and bad aspects that you need to consider, first you do not have anyone to share those special moments with you, you need to be a lot more careful with your safety, but on the good side, you will be motivated to learn the language, you can move around faster and easier, you will step out of your comfort zone. Now traveling in a group is a whole different experience, some things can be slower and it can be difficult to organise, but you do not have to worry too much about the costs, you will be surrounded by people all the time and you will have someone to experience it with. A lot of things can be reflected in your life after a journey, how tolerant you can be about big changes and how open minded and accepting you are, it also makes you more independent, especially managing your time and money. So in my opinion, whenever you travel, do it for different reasons than just bragging about it, do it because there is no better way to achieve new things than learning from different people and cultures, and besides there is no better way to learn from your mistakes.
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memories,
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but
also
learn from them. On certain occasions traveling teaches you a
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lot
more things than school. You gain knowledge talking to
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people
who
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live
in new places, getting to know their way of thinking, traditions, and maybe
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some
stories about their ancestors. As surprising as it may sound it
also
upskills a
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lot
about yourself, how you feel about foreign
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people
and their culture, it for sure
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makes
you more confident
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you will
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experience
things for the
first
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time
and you may discover that you are stronger and smarter than what you
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.
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, it
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So
no matter the countries you visit, traveling alone
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gets
more threatening every year,
therefore
, prior to going on a trip, you always need to look at the advantages and disadvantages about the decisions you take and the safety that place can provide you.

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experiences
, if not the best one, that exists.
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Just
imagine how amazing it is to go from one place to another, and having the
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time
of your life in a journey that will
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make
you feel things you have never felt.

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So
that is
why traveling has one of the biggest impacts in the world economy, there are a
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lot
of reports that
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show
that the
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Travel
&
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Tourism
sector experienced 3. 5% growth in 2019 (World
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Travel
&
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Tourism
Council). Over the past years, a
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lot
of jobs
were created
, making
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Travel
&
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Tourism
the best partner for
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governments
to generate employment. These reports
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help
us provide public and private sectors with solid evidence of the huge worth this brings to the economy.
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Some
of the countries that
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make
the highest amount of money from
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tourism
are France, the United Kingdom, Italy and Thailand.

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But
traveling sounds
really
fun until you
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realise
how expensive it is, and even more if you are going on your
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own
; when you
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travel
alone there are a few
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good
and
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aspects that you need to consider,
first
you do not have anyone to share those special moments with you, you need to be a
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lot
more careful with your safety,
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but
on the
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good
side, you will
be motivated
to learn the language, you can
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move
around faster and easier, you will step out of your comfort zone.

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Now
traveling in a group is a whole
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different
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experience
,
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some
things can be slower and it can be difficult to
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organise
,
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you do not
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have to
worry too much about the costs, you will
be surrounded
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people
all the
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time
and you will have someone to
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experience
it with.

A
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of things can
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in your life after a journey, how tolerant you can be about
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big
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changes
and how
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open minded
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also
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makes
you more independent,
especially
managing your
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time
and money.

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So
in my opinion, whenever you
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travel
, do it for
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different
reasons than
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just
bragging about it, do it
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because
there is no better way to achieve new things than learning from
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different
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people
and cultures, and
besides
there is no better way to learn from your mistakes.
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IELTS essay Traveling alone or on a tour...

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
545 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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