Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Many people believe that today's life is much more convenient and easier than it was for the previous generations. What are the challenges facing today's generations? What can be done to mitigate those difficulties?

Many people believe that today's life is much more convenient and easier than it was for the previous generations. What are the challenges facing today's generations? What can be done to mitigate those difficulties? Pgjew
It is true that compared to the past, life is a lot more convenient and comfortable thanks to the development of modern society. However, there are also existing difficulties influencing their lives that need to be dealt with. One of the most serious issues faced by today’s generation is global warming, the gradual heating of the earth primarily caused by human activities. That the Earth’s temperature increases will lead to severe consequences such as the melting of polar ice caps, extreme weather conditions, droughts, . . . , which all have an adverse influence on human lives. Another challenge that needs mentioning is infectious diseases, resulting from organisms such as bacteria, parasites, and viruses. As people’s lifestyle and environment nowadays have changed worse, one may get these types of diseases by consuming contaminated food and water or being exposed to those organisms.
It is true that compared to the past, life is a lot more convenient and comfortable thanks to the development of modern society.
However
, there are
also
existing difficulties influencing their
lives
that need to
be dealt
with.

One of the most serious issues faced by
today
’s generation is global warming, the gradual heating of the earth
primarily
caused by human activities. That the Earth’s temperature increases will lead to severe consequences such as the melting of polar ice caps, extreme weather conditions, droughts
, .
.
.
,
which all have an adverse influence on human
lives
. Another challenge that needs mentioning is infectious diseases, resulting from organisms such as bacteria, parasites, and viruses. As
people
’s lifestyle and environment nowadays have
changed
worse, one may
get
these types of diseases by consuming contaminated food and water or
being exposed
to those organisms.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Many people believe that today's life is much more convenient and easier than it was for the previous generations. What are the challenges facing today's generations? What can be done to mitigate those difficulties?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
142 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5.5band
    What are you doing all day??
    Well today we were wake up late in the morning because ankush arjun and manraj is came at my home yesterday night so thats why and after that we ate our breakfast and then we were going to haveli fir some work and then after some time they were go to our homes amd after that my maternal uncle was ca...
  • 5.5band
    More and more young people play games on social media. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Should these games be banned?
    Nowaday, technology is evolving day by day all over the world and with it, young people play games on social media more and more. We cannot deny how its benefits bring to our life, but for me, the disadvantages of this have negative effects on young people and we need to control this problem by cons...
  • 6band
    Paragraph describing hair
    Her mother’s hair is cut to shoulder width and held in place with a light blue headband. Her mother’s hair is coarse and hard due to hard labor all year round. Her mother’s hair has become grayed over time, which has passed so quickly or due to the worries and sorrows her mother faced in life. Altho...
  • 6band
    What happens when children make activities that they dislike?
    In this essay I will talk about how young children feel when their parents force them to do activities that they dislike, I will explain a little about how they thought before, also about some traditions that Mexico has and how doing activities that they do not want to do can affect them. This way o...
  • 6band
    The amount of electronic waste is continuously growing. What do you think are the reasons behind and suggest some of the ways to deal with it.
    It is undeniably true that billions of tons electronic garbage is thrown annually around the world and it's quantity is escalating each passing day. It has become a worldwide concern because of uncommon reasons which I will mention forward along with possible solutions in upcoming paragraphs. To em...
  • 6band
    Why are students stressed and how does it impact them?
    “Nothing is permanent in this wicked world, not even our troubles. ” Charles Chaplin This essay will analyze the stress in students. Stress is an emotional response to any event that makes you feel frustrated, angry or nervous. We cannot control the diseases that we experiment but, we can fight aga...