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travel from An Giang to Kiên Giang

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We plan to travel to Kien Giang together. We predict we will take about 3 days to get there. Firstly, on Monday, November 22nd, 2021, Quynh and Thao will go from the Eastern Bus Terminal from Dong Nai to Dong Thap province at 4 am. It takes about 231 kilometers in 4 hours. Next, when we reach Dong Thap province, we will go to Ai Vy or Khanh Vinh houses to rest and then four of us will wait for Ngoc Phuong from An Giang to come here. Because, in our opinion, it is estimated that going from Dong Thap to Kien Giang will be faster and especially the bus fare will be cheaper than going from An Giang to Kien Giang. Secondly, Quynh, Thao, Vinh, Vy, Phuong decides to buy a ticket at Sa Dec bus station in Dong Thap province to Kien Giang bus station with a total journey time of 2 hours to get to Kien Giang. If we’re lucky, we’ll get there sooner than expected. Finally, in Kien Giang, we will come to pick up Thuy Vi. According to the plan, we will travel to Phu Quoc for 2 days, maybe we will bathe in Bai Truong, Bai Sao and spend more than 3 days to reach the Nam Du Islands consisting of 21 islands large and small.
We plan to travel to
Kien
Giang
together. We predict we will take about 3 days to
get
there.

Firstly
, on Monday, November 22nd, 2021,
Quynh
and
Thao
will go from the Eastern Bus Terminal from Dong
Nai
to Dong
Thap
province at 4 am. It takes about 231 kilometers in 4 hours.

Next
, when we reach Dong
Thap
province, we will go to
Ai
Vy
or
Khanh
Vinh
houses
to rest and then four of us will wait for
Ngoc
Phuong
from An
Giang
to
come
here.
Because
, in our opinion, it
is estimated
that going from Dong
Thap
to
Kien
Giang
will be faster and
especially
the bus fare will be cheaper than going from An
Giang
to
Kien
Giang
.

Secondly
,
Quynh
,
Thao
,
Vinh
,
Vy
,
Phuong
decides to
buy
a ticket at
Sa
Dec bus station in Dong
Thap
province to
Kien
Giang
bus station with a total journey time of 2 hours to
get
to
Kien
Giang
. If we’re lucky, we’ll
get
there sooner than
expected
.

Finally
, in
Kien
Giang
, we will
come
to pick up
Thuy
Vi. According to the plan, we will travel to
Phu
Quoc
for 2 days, maybe we will bathe in
Bai
Truong
,
Bai
Sao
and spend more than 3 days to reach the Nam Du Islands consisting of 21 islands large and
small
.
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IELTS essay travel from An Giang to Kiên Giang

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