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The table below shows the percentages of households in the US with some chosen durables.

The table below shows the percentages of households in the US with some chosen durables. BLJwa
The line given graph depicts electricity consumption in England on normal winter and summer days. The pie graph demonstrates how power is consumed in a typical British family. In general, it can be seen that both lines in the graph fluctuate and the requirement for electricity in winter is sharply higher than that in summer. As is observed from the pie chart, the electricity used for heating is much more than others. In the winter, the electricity consumption is about 35000 units a day, whereas, in the summer, it is around 18000 units per day. Again, the demand for electricity varies throughout the day, with usage during 6: 00 and 9: 00 a. m. usually lower than demand at other times. During the winter, demand is highest between 21: 00 and 23: 00 hours, while during the summer, demand is highest between 13: 00 and 14: 00 hours. According to the given pie chart, I see the demand for ovens kettles, washing machines took 17, 5%. There are demands for lighting, TV, radio and Vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools which consume 30% of total electricity including light, TV, Radio, vacuum cleaner, food mixer, and other electric told and devices. It’s obvious that heating rooms and heating water were the main purposes people in the UK consume electricity. As it accounted for 52, 5% in the given pie chart. We can infer from the charts that people’s heating needs soar in the freezing days that lead to typical daily requirement for electricity doubled in the winter in England
The line
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graph depicts
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electricity
consumption in England on normal
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winter
and
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summer
days. The
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pie
graph demonstrates how power
is consumed
in a typical British family.
In general
, it can be
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seen
that both lines in the graph fluctuate and the requirement for
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electricity
in
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winter
is
sharply
higher than that in
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summer
. As
is observed
from the
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pie
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chart
, the
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electricity
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used
for
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heating
is much more than others.

In the
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winter
, the
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electricity
consumption is about 35000 units a day, whereas, in the
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summer
, it is around 18000 units per day. Again, the
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demand
for
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electricity
varies throughout the day, with usage during 6: 00 and 9: 00 a. m.
usually
lower than
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demand
at other times. During the
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winter
,
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demand
is highest between 21: 00 and 23: 00 hours, while during the
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summer
,
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demand
is highest between 13: 00 and 14: 00 hours.

According to the
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, I
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the
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for ovens kettles, washing machines took 17, 5%. There are
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demands
for lighting, TV, radio and Vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools which consume 30% of total
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electricity
including light, TV, Radio, vacuum cleaner, food mixer, and other electric
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told
and devices. It’s obvious that
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heating
rooms and
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heating
water were the main purposes
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people
in the UK consume
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electricity
. As it accounted for 52, 5% in the
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given
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pie
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chart
. We can infer from the
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charts
that
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people
’s
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heating
needs soar in the freezing days that lead to typical daily requirement for
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electricity
doubled in the
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winter
in
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England
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IELTS essay The table below shows the percentages of households in the US with some chosen durables.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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