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Travel and misunderstanding between countries

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Travelling abroad for relaxation prevails recently because of the stiff competitions among white-collar workers. Under this situation, some people are concerned about the clashes that cause between the locals and the visitors. From my perspective, these worries sound reasonable. Apparently, visitors spend one or two weeks in traveling to an exotic country. In the limited time, it is fairly difficult for tourists to get familiar to the local culture. Also, it may cause misunderstandings in mutual communication due to language barrier. It is well-known that different places have its own communication pattern including gestures and expressions. Thus understanding well of these distinctions in an alien culture is unrealistic in such a short time for travelers as fewer of which are willing to grasp the information regarding the destination in advance. On the local residents' standing point, the influx of international tourists may constitute intrusion to the inhabitants. Naturally, local people tend to sell souveniors to the travelers instead of dedicating to crop yield due to the fact that the international tourism increases the local residents' income and spurs the local economy. However, the visitors seems understand slightly. Take Chinese visitors for example, they form a habit of bargaining for everything, particular the souveniors. These behaviors would contribute to tension easily because of the difference in different culture system. Although appropriate communication between visitors and the local people may help establish better understanding in differing countries and some stereotypes may be eliminated as well, the limited time of travel and the difference in culture pattern would cause clashes in more cases. In order to maintain the intended goal of enhancing mutual understanding, I believe, the visitors should learn the culture difference beforehand.
Travelling abroad for relaxation prevails recently
because
of the stiff competitions among white-collar workers. Under this situation,
some
people
are concerned
about the clashes that cause between the
locals
and the
visitors
. From my perspective, these worries sound reasonable.

Apparently
,
visitors
spend one or two weeks in traveling to an exotic country. In the limited time, it is
fairly
difficult for tourists to
get
familiar to the
local
culture
.
Also
, it may cause misunderstandings in mutual communication due to language barrier. It is well-known that
different
places have its
own
communication pattern including gestures and expressions.
Thus
understanding well of these distinctions in an alien
culture
is unrealistic in such a short time for travelers as fewer of which are willing to grasp the information regarding the destination in advance.

On the
local
residents' standing point, the influx of international tourists may constitute intrusion to the inhabitants.
Naturally
,
local
people
tend to sell
souveniors
to the travelers
instead
of dedicating to crop yield due to the fact that the international tourism increases the
local
residents' income and spurs the
local
economy.
However
, the
visitors
seems understand
slightly
. Take Chinese
visitors
for example
, they form a habit of bargaining for everything, particular the
souveniors
. These behaviors would contribute to tension
easily
because
of the difference in
different
culture
system.

Although appropriate communication between
visitors
and the
local
people
may
help
establish better understanding in differing countries and
some
stereotypes may
be eliminated
as well
, the limited time of travel and the difference in
culture
pattern would cause clashes in more cases. In order to maintain the intended goal of enhancing mutual understanding, I believe, the
visitors
should learn the
culture
difference beforehand.
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IELTS essay Travel and misunderstanding between countries

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