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My first teacher and my first goals to achieve my future life

My first teacher and my first goals to achieve my future life XnKYN

Teacher is the person who teach all pupils from their childhood to find them own way to live in future life. In my childhood l was interested in watching educational films on TV. Because l was surprised teachers' work and hopefully to learn their honorable and hard work for my future dream. When l went to school l saw my first teacher and this person was my ideal. I tried to look like her so that l learnt her good character, learning style even her clothing style. Because of my teacher l was interested in English and l worked hard on my own to my study. At last l achieved my goals to become English teacher. To sum up person always to put their goals in the first for their future life.

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Teacher
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own
 way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
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Because
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hard
 work for my future dream. When l went to school l This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
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teacher
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so
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learnt
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good
 character, learning style even her clothing style. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teacher
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 in English and l worked This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 on my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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 to my study. At last l achieved my goals to become English You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teacher
. To sum up person always to put their goals in the first
 for their future life. 