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In carrying out its operational duties, the secretary will be faced with many activities or tasks related to communication, both oral and written communication. One of the professionalism of secretaries in carrying out their duties is influenced by the ability of the secretaries to communicate. Communication can be done in the form of verbal communication as well as non-verbal communication. Verbal communication is the process of communicating both orally and in writing using words. Meanwhile, non-verbal communication is a process of delivering messages by using gestures or signals not by using words. Non-verbal communication is very influential on the success of the secretary in communicating and will be able to increase the professionalism of the secretary in carrying out his duties.
In carrying out its operational duties, the
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activities or tasks related to
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, both oral and written
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communication
. One of the professionalism of
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secretaries
in carrying out their duties
is influenced
by the ability of the
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secretaries
to communicate.
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Communication
can
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in the form of verbal
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communication
as well
as non-verbal
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communication
. Verbal
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communication
is the process of communicating both
orally
and in writing using words. Meanwhile, non-verbal
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communication
is a process of delivering messages by using gestures or signals not by using words. Non-verbal
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communication
is
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very
influential on the success of the
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secretary
in communicating and will be able to increase the professionalism of the
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secretary
in carrying out his duties.
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IELTS essay translation 1 pplease help me

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
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