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Describe a film/movie that made you laugh

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Now, I wanna tell you about a series cartoon film which is Pucca. This is an animated movie about a girl named Pucca and her crush named Garu. The side bun is her signature hairstyle, you know it like Na tra hairstyle. She lives with her three guardians in a Chinese restaurant and Pucca's job is to deliver on a scooter. You know Pucca has a lovely and loving little girl, only when someone interferes with her and Garu's moment, her eyes are on fire and begin to perform her martial arts. When I was a kid, I watched Pucca on the Disney channel, until adult I watched it on Youtube. After a long tiring day of studying, when I get home, I will open Pucca to see, it will make me relax my mind and be happier. With funny moments when Pucca looks for a chance to steal a kiss from Garu. Out of all the episodes, my favorite is an episode called "Bungee Jump". One episode talks about Garu trying to muster up the courage to do a bungee jump when he jumped when he saw Pucca jump and she took the opportunity when they were parallel to each other to kiss him. When the two jumped, a third person appeared that was Satan Clause with a fat body. When he jumped down, he knocked over the scaffolding and the three of them fell into the river where they were jumping. Pucca was the one who saved Garu, but she was so angry that Satan Clause got in between her and Garu, so while he was still floating unconscious in the river, he took a large rock and threw it into the water and crushed him. If you don’t watch, I will suggest you should watch this series film or this episode.
Now
, I
wanna
tell
you about a series cartoon film which is
Pucca
. This is an animated movie about a girl named
Pucca
and her crush named
Garu
. The side bun is her signature hairstyle, you know it like Na
tra
hairstyle. She
lives
with her three guardians in a Chinese restaurant and
Pucca
's job is to deliver on a scooter. You know
Pucca
has a lovely and loving
little
girl,
only
when someone interferes with her and
Garu
's moment, her eyes are on fire and
begin
to perform her martial arts. When I was a kid, I
watched
Pucca
on the Disney channel, until adult I
watched
it on
Youtube
. After a long tiring day of studying, when I
get
home, I will open
Pucca
to
see
, it will
make
me relax my mind and be happier. With
funny
moments when
Pucca
looks for a chance to steal a kiss from
Garu
. Out of all the
episodes
, my favorite is an
episode
called
"
Bungee Jump
"
. One
episode
talks about
Garu
trying to muster up the courage to do a bungee jump when he jumped when he
saw
Pucca
jump and
she took the opportunity when they were parallel to each other to kiss him. When the two jumped, a third person appeared that was Satan Clause with a
fat
body. When he jumped down, he knocked over the scaffolding and the three of them fell into the river where they were jumping.
Pucca
was the one who saved
Garu
,
but
she was
so
angry that Satan Clause
got
in between her and
Garu
,
so
while he was
still
floating unconscious in the river, he took a large rock and threw it into the water and crushed him. If you don’t
watch
, I will suggest you should
watch
this series film or this
episode
.
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IELTS essay Describe a film/movie that made you laugh

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304 words
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