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A higher taxes or lower taxes better for society?

A higher taxes or lower taxes better for society? 53LOm
What is the tariff? We know that thx is part of the government income. The state introduce various kind of tax for covering their income such as value added tax, income tax, NBT, stamp duty and so forth. However, number of people declare that higher taxes policy is better for society. Another people state that lower taxes policy is better for society. I believe that any country should have fair tax policy for creating better society. When states consume their income, some time they want to arise the taxable income. Therefore, they introduce new kind of tariff and increase the current rates. As a result of higher taxes rate, price of consumer goods are increased. Then community purchased ability are dropped and life position of public are declined. For example, our country government increased value added tax from 12% to 15%. Then persons who are workers with monthly salary, they could not spend their remuneration behalf of incremental price. Therefore, their consumption level declined. It is not better to society. When we talk about lower tax rate, this policy can process in develop countries. Those countries' government can improve the minimum tariff. Those countries can get more benefit such as price decresement and incresement of purchased posibilities and life situation. For example, develop countries of the world have assesed lowest tax amount for consumption goods. Therefore, those communities can invest their money for enjoying the essential items. It cause to incremental life style. Accroding to my point of view and above facts, I supposed that, tax is main source of income of government in every country. Actually, tax income assist to develop infrastructure facilities and life style. Some countries improve their long -term facilities by sacrify their consumption under high level of levy rate. However, society do not have any problem regarding tax rate, if can spend their life without more difficults. I believe that higher or lower tax rate influence to the public on management of tariff income.
What is the
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tariff
? We know that
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thx
is part of the
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government
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income
. The state
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introduce
various kind of
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tax
for covering their
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income
such as value
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added
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tax
,
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income
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tax
, NBT, stamp duty and
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so
forth.
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, number of
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people
declare that higher
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taxes
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policy
is
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better
for society. Another
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people
state that lower
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taxes
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policy
is
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better
for society. I believe that any
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country
should have
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fair
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tax
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policy
for creating
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better
society.

When states consume their
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income
,
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some
time they want to arise the taxable
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income
.
Therefore
, they introduce new kind of
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tariff
and increase the
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current
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rates
.
As a result
of higher
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taxes
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rate
, price of consumer
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goods
are increased
. Then community
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purchased
ability
are dropped
and
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life
position of public
are declined
.
For example
, our
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country
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government
increased value
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added
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tax
from 12% to 15%. Then persons who are workers with monthly salary, they could not spend their remuneration behalf of incremental price.
Therefore
, their consumption level declined. It is not
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better
to society.

When we talk about lower
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tax
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rate
, this
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policy
can process in develop
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countries
. Those countries'
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government
can
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improve
the minimum
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tariff
. Those
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countries
can
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get
more benefit such as price
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decresement
and
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incresement
of
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purchased
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posibilities
and
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life
situation.
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, develop
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countries
of the world have
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assesed
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lowest
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tax
amount for consumption
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goods
.
Therefore
, those communities can invest their money for enjoying the essential items. It
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cause
to incremental
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life
style.

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Accroding
to my point of view and above facts, I supposed that,
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tax
is main source of
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income
of
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government
in every
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country
. Actually,
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tax
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income
assist to develop infrastructure facilities and
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life
style.
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Some
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countries
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improve
their long -term facilities by
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sacrify
their consumption under high level of levy
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rate
.
However
, society do not have any problem regarding
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tax
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rate
, if can spend their
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life
without more
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difficults
. I believe that higher or lower
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tax
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rate
influence to the public on management of
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tariff
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income
.
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IELTS essay A higher taxes or lower taxes better for society?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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